Chapter 5: I wish you've written more ....
Obviously it had more potentials but I can't just tell you what to do with your own fic Still i wish we would've been able to know other things and the characters in more detail and their upcoming challenges..
I always find myself thinking and coming back to this fanfic, so often that it's one of my favourites. The whole story is so well crafted and executed I can never get enough. Its every little detail that makes it flawless. ^^
Chapter 5: AAAAAAAAHHHHH THIS IS GOLD IM IN TEARS, THIS IS SO AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL I LOVE IT I LOVE YOU I NEED MORE BUT IM ASKING FOR TOO MUCH ARENT I AHHHHHH I LOVE KAISOO
Chapter 5: 40k words??? Wowww it sure is a lot! But its all worth it because ASFHJKL THIS FIC IS SO AMAZING! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE the fighting scene!! Its so thoroughly written that i felt as if I'm watching it with my own eyes. Like I'm watching anime! I can't believe that in the middle of the fight, when I suppose that kai should be the one controlling everything and is fully conscious, he still cared about ksoo. He still wants to save him. I don't know of its because ji is still there and maybe it's ji consciousness, or that maybe because ji and kaoo are bind together, but i still do think that kai has gotten smitten with ji and ksoo actually. Just that he finds it hard to digest and he's still a demon wanting freedom. But...somehow, i dont want him out of ji body, because....there'll be no kai and ji. It wouldn't be complete.... after reading this till the end, I'm still curious about kai's real name!! I wanna know!! And I'll also be looking forward to the xtra featuring the Jungs because, eell who doesn't wanna kno how the girls cope with their daily life after this ^^~
Chapter 4: Ji seems like a kid when hes talking to baekhyun and i just cant imagine him to be best friends with yoon and yuri ! Its so damn cuteeeee AND YES! I do like the fighting scene! Its /thumbs up/ /applause applause/
Chapter 3: I feel bad for ji... well at least he do have friends. And oouuhhh ksoo and lord do r planning somethinggggg XD ur way of writing is really good ~
Chapter 5: Woah. This is most definitely a FAVORITE. Omg I've never enjoyed a fic and gotten so emerged in one in such a long time!!! I wish I had found this sooner!! This was a thrhillimg and sweet ending fic. I do wonder what these love birds will be up to in the future hehe
Chapter 5: Woah. This is most definitely a FAVORITE. Omg I've never enjoyed a fic and gotten so emerged in one in such a long time!!! I wish I had found this sooner!! This was a thrhillimg and sweet ending fic. I do wonder what these love birds will be up to in the future hehe
Chapter 5: This is a pretty great read! Awesome world building/set-up, loved all the supernatural elements and they were well explained! Thanks for sharing your writing! I enjoyed reading it!
Omg I would love to read (if you decided to make this a thing) a spinoff about kai and jongin's relationship growing up and their interactions; how kai became who jongin thought was a friend... or a KAI pov!!!! I'm not even in this for the kaisoo anymore tbh I go back for the kai jongin interactions
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