When you pick the sketchiest bus there is, how else do you expect your trip to go? what was supposed to be a simple 4 hour ride to busan ends up as a wild adventure across south korea. join our tourists as they encounter the craziest experiences of their life so far. will they even make it to busan? who knows, find out on the roadtrip!
rules
one. do not steal this storyline or any of the characters used two. don't leave rude comments, if you have a criticism you can pm it to me. three. there are fourteen characters guys. your character won't get major amounts of "screentime" every chapter, ok? i promise i won't neglect them, but just forgive me if i put them on the backburner every now and then.
Cast
Kim seokjin min yoongi jung hoseok kim namjoon park jimin KIM taehyung Jeon jungkook choi bongcha tanaka hiromi Moon kyori PARK namjoo HAn yuri lEe miyeon pYO uisa
I know I said I would update soon, but I kinda didn't read my books for honors english and then i had band camp, but i'll finish it next saturday i promise!!
Chapter 3: I'm laughing so hard that you deem the other characters 'the oldies' XDD.
I appreciate the little tid bits of characters in this chapter. Jimin's panic at the sight of Yuri was perfect. And Namjoon hitting his head? Perfect. :D I'm looking forward to what else you get these kids into~!
Chapter 3: ah i loved this first chapter !! you threw in the scene with the yoga balls which is hilarious, and aunt hyo teasing jimin was so cute. i can't wait to find out what the surprise is !!
Chapter 3: firstly, ajdkfhdh sorry this comment is late, life is getting hectic : ( mian.
Kyori's mom is the cutest, wow. Was totally expected her to threaten to suffocate them with one of the yoga balls while chasing them out of her yoga studio- ok, but then again, tae and miyeon seem to be a playful pair. cute.
"TAEHYUNG AND MIYEON WERE PLAYING WITH BALLS." akdjfkdkdj i think i choked-
NAMJOON OH GOD AJSJFKDKDJS do i pity the bus or do i pity him, istg
+++ JIMIN AND TAE HAHAHAH TAE'S JUST BEING ALL CASUAL LEAVING JIMIN TO SUFFER IN SILENCE, AW. Poor kid.
Yuri too ! Fashionably late, that's my girl < 3
This chapter was a great start : " ) ah, what kind of antics would the crew get up to on this trip. Lowkey wORRIED for them and their sanity tbh HAHAHAH.
Chapter 2: Oh my goodness these are so cute. I can't even. All the names on the hovers were priceless. IRL Prince Charming, ZzzzZZzzzz...LOL. Can't wait to see more of this and YAY you're writing! :D
Chapter 2: I'm so happy this is literally the best thing ever ashhghj and that phone layout is so cute !! i'm so excited for this honestly i'm shaking !!
omg yay! i was waiting for this!
first off, thanks for choosing uisa!! i wasn't expecting it and it caught me off guard lol
askjhas the message miyeon sent to uisa, i'm die!! that m,ade me laugh
as well as taerhyung cutting his hair at 2 am and miyeon NOT replying for like hours
friday goes off, i don't know what jimin's talking about.
i'm also the creepy janitor
the layout is really cute too! also unrealistic b/c who has their phone charged that much? LMAO
Chapter 2: what the heck was taehyung thinking to cut his bangs at 2:15am in the morning- LIVING ON THE EDGE RIGHT THERE. HAHAHAHA.
the format of this prologue's really cute tbh, I really enjoyed reading it ! THE CONTACT NAMES THOUGH, MIYEON, OMFG HAHAHAHA. Can't wait for the first chapter, and good luck on writing it. Ah, we all know how y it feels to have a writer's block so it's all good, and considering the fact that this amazing prologue came out of it, claps claps.
+ oh yea- i almost forgot, thanks for choosing yuri, holy , amazing. congrats to the others who got chosen too ! ! !! !!
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