Electric Gazes and Seafoam Eyes

Description

With the words forever unspoken dying at the tip of his tongue with each passing second, Luhan thought, I love you, but didn't say it

Foreword

A/N: Loosely based on the manga Orange by Takano Ichigo; I wrote this as a sophomore for an English class and it was just sitting on my computer so I decided to change it a bit and post it as a fic. It needs to be worked on, so I'll try to edit it in the future.

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bluelle #1 Jan 1, 2016 16:19:51

Chapter 1: i really don't like angst but i love how this story was told...

great work!

CallMeSwaggy #2 Jan 1, 2016 16:16:55

Chapter 1: I adored reading your story ! I read the manga Orange too, but this One-Shot is just a masterpiece. I'm wondering if I prefer Orange or your One-Shot haha :). It was well-written, enough description and it wasn't boring at all ! Hmm I have a request, and you may refuse if you want but I still ask: I just started a blog of fanfictions and translations of fanfictions I liked, because French is my first language. I would like to translate your fanfiction, so French people can read it through my blog, and I will of course give you proper credits and a link to the original (yours) :). Can I ? Thanks in advance.