Down the Rabbit Hole

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 He loved her and she loved him. 

But it wasn't that simple.

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When Alice fell down the rabbit hole she ended up in Wonderland.

I ended up in hell.

 

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Foreword

Genre: romance, action, crime, and (dark) comedy 

Style: 1st POV

Recommended age: +

Trigger warnings: blood, suicide, depression, violence, cursing, (everything mild)

Rated chapters will be marked M 

 

This is the new awesome version of Moon is Broken, which again is the DaraGon version of Just a Big Fat Lie. Since the story was originally written for original characters (the new version too) the descriptions of the characters (ie, height, looks, hairstyle, character traits) might not fit the real celebrities. Please, use your imagination >___< I will not be posting the original character version on AFF, but I will post it on Soompi later.

I decided to rewrite Moon is Broken because it was, frankly speaking, a horrible poorly written mess full of typos and grammatical mistakes. I have made significant changes to the plot so now it should be WAY less confusing and I promise everything will totally make sense this time! The new version will be a bit darker and more mature, more violent too so prepare yourselves mentally! The main idea has not changed, but I think you will still enjoy reading this new version even if you know all the big secrets from the old one! Naturally there will be new secrets and the plot will be as twisted as ever! If you have not read the original version I don't recommend reading it, the new version will follow the plot only loosely. 

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sassyfever25 #1
Chapter 14: I like it like it... theres so much secret unrevealed yet....
nabixxi #2
Chapter 13: Lol I think seungri doesn't fit on his character here since in reality, he's this playful and funny idol. I just don't really see some spark between him and dara. DARAGON FIGHTING!
nygdlonehi #3
Chapter 13: Finally jiyong!!!!! At least there's no seungri to annoy me on this chapter.
CEOSeungriStan #4
Chapter 12: Am I the only one who wants it to be seungridara and not daragon or tabisan? XD I love their interactions so far. ^^
Miaka279 #5
And finally! Kyaaa *screams with feels* i'm so excited to read thiiiiisss. Been a reader of Moon is broken and just waiting forupdates, but this! thiiiis! Omegaaah~~! Thank you for this, Authornim *Bows 90 degrees*
hakunamatata08 #6
Im actually reading the moon is broken for 2nd time nowww and then I saw that there is a new versioooon yaaaaaay thanks authornim!!!
nygdlonehi #7
I'm honestly crying from so much frustration.
nygdlonehi #8
Chapter 11: "I don't get anything anymore and I give up trying to understand" THIS IS SO ME. Idk why but Seungri's character is really really annoying for me. Ugh every time he calls her babe i have this strong urge to punch him in the face. HONESTLY WHERE IS JIYONG. SO HE COULD CLEAR EVERY CONFUSION THERE IS. SO CLOSE TO GIVING UP ON THIS STORY TBH. ITS REALLY REALLY FRUSTRATING ME I'M SORRY. Every new chapter there's a new thing/revelation/scene adds up to my confusion. I hate this feeling.
Crystalic607 #9
Chapter 11: Interesting but does jiyong have this disorder where his face changes to seungri hahha
missladygalaxy #10
I really loved "The Moon Is Broken" (although, yes it is REALLY confusing and frustrating for the first read), but I love how everything adds up at the end, so that's why I'm here! Love it!
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