Growing Pains: The Undeserved

Description

 

Hyukjae loved Donghae. That was a fact Hyukjae himself acknowledged from the time they just met. Who knew that his love would be rewarded when a fate led to him marrying the one who captured his heart with a mere pencil and a paper. But when feelings were not reciprocated, Hyukjae played along and let his love carry him into fantasy where one day his husband would love him back. Tested day after day, and one day he snapped. He did not deserve this.

Donghae never knew regret until the day came. The day that he thought he would be grateful of, the day he thought he would be free after being shackeled in a marriage with Hyukjae. Never did he thought he would feel so lost, never did he imagined he would feel as if there was a missing piece. He never did realized that he took his husband for granted. Now, he realized, he was the undeserved.


 

The Undeserved

  • Pairing: EunHae ○ HaeHyuk ○ HyukHae
  • Setting: Married AU, South Korea
  • Genre: Romance ○ Angst ○ Fluff 
  • Idea base: Growing Pains MV ○ I really wanted to write something mature in a plot and this happened.
  • A/N: I love angst, and I like a fair ending. Honestly, the last thing I wanted to do was posting up a new story. Turning 17 this year means there will be more responsibility and a big exam. But an idea striked and I was defenseless. Then I sat down and scenes passed through my eyes and voila! Support me juseyo *bows*
  • Credits: The poem in the foreword is mine. Lee Hyukjae and Lee Donghae belongs to themselves. Plot is mine, if there is any similarity in any way, it is not intended. 

Reviewed bymeeno24315 from Mystic Multi Shop

                                           

 

Foreword

Given care

You would not share

Given kind

You would not mind

Given love

You thought I would serve

 

Take care

Do not be in despair

Be kind

While you are not mine

Find love

'Cause mine you no longer deserve

 

To my Dearest, 

the undeserved.

 

haeimecah
Now that I think about it, that kissing scene during the epilogue was inspired by Yuri On Ice xD

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hyukflavor
#1
Gonna suscribe it first, a friend of mine recommend me this onee
cchoimd #2
This is such a great fic!!! Ahhhh cried my eyes out!!
Bangtanboys1952 #3
Chapter 4: Wow, cute!
flower__angels
#4
Chapter 17: hae hyung 😂, such a great stories and the angst feel just right , thank you for writing ;)
yoitsrani
#5
Re-read this masterpiece again💙
pennielee_
#6
Chapter 16: I love it, thank you💙
haestrash #7
I couldn't sleep yesterday and somehow looked for your fics to read again ^^
This is one of my favorites. The angst cut my heart and the fluff really healed it. I really really like it when no matter how angsty it is, the author can always write a happy ending. Thank you authornim for this sweet fic. Miss you. Hope to read more from you again soon ^^
Sjhyukkie #8
Chapter 8: Hae Hyung is so cute... ahhhh💞
Sjhyukkie #9
I’m gonna re read this again. I need some angst 💔
Xiuhunjikook99 #10
Chapter 3: Hello dear author, I don't know if you'll read this but if you do I'll be really happy. First of all, my compliments to have written such an amazing story. This story is my favorite eunhae fanfic, really. There are many good fics out there but this one took a special place in my heart. This is my second time reading it. The first time was back in march and after I was done reading it I thought it was deleted because I couldn't find it anymore, so I scrolled down my history search and finally I found it. I'm not usually someone who leaves comments because I get too immersed when reading stories and read them till the end whitout distractions but I felt like I needed to comment now. I don't know what it is, the writing, the plot or anything else but I love this story so much and I'm a really sensitive and nostalgic person so I got attached to it and after I was done reading it I felt a bittersweet feeling but once I found it again I renewed my feelings to experience new ones as if this is my first time reading it. This means that your story is so good every time I read it it's different from the last. As a writer myself, clearly not at your level, I appreciated the fact that it was so easy to understand and completed which takes lots of commitment and time. I'm italian so my english is not the best and sometimes I don't understand a few words or sentences but it didn't stop me from keep on reading till the end. I just hope it will stay here forever, because I'll be back another time to read it for sure and if one day it's not gonna be here anymore I'll be really heartbroken. Anyway, keep it up! You're doing a really good job and I hope you're doing good in life, that you're healthy and safe and enjoying your life. Till next time.



Dearly, a really appassionate fan, Ludovica. ❤️