Chapter 1: This was really good! I really like horror stuff and this was so nice. The ending was perfect. And I like vampires too so this was a perfect combination. Such a great story, I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it *^^*

Chapter 1: So, I started reading this, and wasn't sure what kind of story this would be. I loved how this was post-apocalyptic, but also a vampire story. I have never read one like this, and I loved it. I thought Sungjong was going to be a victim, but I loved that he wasn't. Myungsoo was the highlight of the story, and the way you portrayed his emotions was great. I honestly thought you were going to kill Myungsoo, instead of him being turned. I loved it♡.

Chapter 1: Sungjong's idea of using humanity's weakest time to his advantage is sick, I can totally understand Myungsoo not wanting to join the vampire. Too bad he has no choice but maybe he could help Sungjong's character develop into more humane...in a sequel ^_*"

Chapter 1: Interesting. I didn't remember the ending of this one but it is a fascinating take on the supernatural and the rebuilding of a world by one who opts to take the chance provided. I do wonder how he was able to extend such protection via their dreams, and control them so strongly from such a distance away, but it's entirely possible in this world, vampires are just that strong. lol

Admittedly, Sungjong as a wannabe vampire god is both creepy and y. All the confidence (y) and all the power (creepy) to make it happen. Damn liar. haha But that wouldn't have been half as fun for him if he'd just let Myungsoo go. Unless he wanted to chase him down and whatnot. That could have been interesting; and in the nature of a predator. *shrug*

After seeing the others go through the process, it was nice to finally know what they were going through when Myungsoo was bitten. Ouch though. He wasn't pulling any punches there was he? Very intriguing read though.

I did see a couple typos in the second half of the chapter, though nothing major. I do have to ask though. Why are you still not satisfied with it? What other things might you do or contemplate to make it better? Hmm. >.>

Chapter 1: Cool story Honey !!!!!!
Thanks for hard work !!!!!!!

Chapter 1: It's just one chapter? I hope you make a sequel, i'm still curious with your story

Chapter 1: Hmm. I remember something like this from a while back. There are typos a plenty but it's still engaging now as it was then too. I don't really remember how it was supposed to end either so hey! Surprise for me. haha I did love your descriptions and that one of the with "the deep colors of sunset beginning to creep across the sky..." So pretty and visceral with the fear added at the end. You also do a very good job of maintaining that steady other presence that only allows Myungsoo to keep moving forward. The urge and need to move; his real fear at being surrounded by infected; his concern about needing to eat or drink or rest. All of it makes sense. Even his inevitable acceptance at the beginning of this, when he contemplated leaving or not. He had nothing left to lose either way, did he?

Very interesting again and I look forward to the next bit! ^_^

Chapter 1: This is amazing update soon author-nim

I will definitely read it ~

Sounds cool Author nim ! :)