Chapter 1: Well this was interesting and a bit of a twist on the prompt but there's certainly nothing wrong with that. haha After all, they're generally open to interpretation. ;) I can see why you've left this as incomplete though; it doesn't feel like just a oneshot. You've got a lot more of a potential world in the works already, what with Himchan's mother apparently being ill and his father being a great Magus. I highly doubt he's just going to let Himchan go that easily if/when they finally do graduate. heh

I was curious how Himchan got the invisibility cloak himself or, in this world, are there several? You also had an interesting way to keep them from being completely suspected as being in a relationship, though it was apparent it wasn't completely full proof. And I do have to wonder how Junhong and Daehyun might have felt about the whole situation. That would be interesting to see at a later point. I will say that Yongguk and Himchan's brief meeting by the lake was sweet and cute in it's own way. And if they might have been acting somewhat juvenile, I'd say that so were the adults, in all fairness. haha I also did laugh at the Junhong and banana scene at the very end. lol

I'm curious if you're going to continue this though? It feels like you might but I can't be sure. heh Either way, enjoyable read and congrats for finishing it for the Secret Santa. ^_^

CAN YOU BELIEVE THIS ?? Youre my secret santa???????????????????

Chapter 2: owwww i tough its an update, Author-nim XD

Chapter 1: It's the second time I read a Harry Potter AU with this couple and I love it. I wanted to read mooooore D: Thanks for the story <3