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Myungsoo can see the numbers counting down over other people's heads, the ones that say that they're about to find the love of their life. And yet he can see nothing when looks in the mirror.

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Entered into the Soulmate writing contest!

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Luhan143 #1
Chapter 1: That was short yet wonderful. Your stories are still amazingly good as always :)
-Michael
biasedonaron1
#2
Chapter 1: AHH!! this was precious!!
ive never been a fan of infinite but i was looking through your stories (like the stalker i am lmao) and i saw this prompt and i was so excited to read it, being a huge er for soulmate aus and anything related.
it seemed so simple and easy to read and i was impressed by the way they fell together, im glad i read it ^-^ it wasn't necessarily fluffy like i expected it to be, but i was happy with it nonetheless :D
god, i need to look through your stories more often haha
unicorniaPMl #3
Chapter 1: This was really amazing story dont have word for that I love it ❤
skoreafan #4
Chapter 1: OMG thanks for writing an Infinite story! And I really love the soulmate AU idea though it's really awesome~
Amalya
#5
Chapter 1: Well then. This ended in a way that I wasn't sure it was going to but I was happy to see the ending. Woohoo! I'm also utterly surprised at the lack of subs and comments here. It's... baffling. I know they're not a hugely common pair (I think) but the story was good and it made for a delightful read. haha

I'm wondering if Myungsoo's inability to see his own numbers is something along the lines of how seers or fortune tellers can't predict their own paths and whatnot. But I did enjoy seeing how he puzzled things out and how it became just one more thing to not notice throughout the day. In the beginning, it felt like his mother's reaction was a little extreme but that's just me. I'm inclined to think that kids have rather active imaginations and one instance of seeing things resulting in the visits and label further down the road was odd for me.

Beyond that, the rest was delightfully believable, if tinged with moments of bittersweetness. Poor Woohyun but only somewhat since it wasn't all bad and there was more to come. *nods* And I also enjoyed Myungsoo's thoughts in regards to maturity and how that might also effect the appearance of said numbers. The scene where Woohyun in particular simply made him feel right at home after their separation was so sweet and heartwarming. :D And by the time I got to the end, I was doing my damndest not to let my eyes jump down to the last couple lines. lol It was a struggle but well done!

I rather enjoyed your twist on the prompt for sure! <3