The Tale of Bumbling Idiots

Description

The struggles of two comrades tackling the death prison, a.k.a. high school, range from the common identity crisis to puberty's drastic physical influence. It's the need to abandon those shameful middle school personalities in the entrance to becoming "mature" and "cool", but there're some people that are worth knowing about your hidden prepubescent secrets and possibly your concerning hoarding problem. For Jongdae, it was Yuji. Through thick and thin, nothing was impenatrable to their bond, especially one made in their most vulnerable and pure time - teenage adolescence.

 

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Jongdae looked at her across the aisle, his smile growing when she looked back, as radiant as ever.

She mouthed to him, "You look great."

He mouthed back, "You don't."

She glanced around for a moment, and flipped him the bird. He blew a kiss at her.

 

It seemed so long ago, Jongdae mused, but how did they eventually get to this stage in their life?

Foreword

This story is submitted to the Short Haul category and Silent Love Theme for Koreykrypta's Tender Rose contest: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/837292

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Also, if you liked this story, please vote for mine in the Reader's Choice Award for the contest here!

 

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I'm incredibly happy that this story earned 2nd place in Korekrypta's Short Haul category!

A special thanks to you subscribers and those who've upvoted: shesamytheu, Memorize, CellyWelly, brownlipstick, unnivisual, Kai_milkytea, darkangle, sasharahmanisa, Korekrypta, and prathyu!! 

It means a lot to me that you've enjoyed my story, and thanks to you readers for going on the brief journey with Jongdae and Yuji! :)

killerdaisy
I know it says i've updated but there's no chapter, sorry guys, I'm completing chapters out of order so bear with me... second chapter should be up tomorrow!

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Zuali_Renthlei
#1
Chapter 14: This is so sweet!
I love the fact that there is no romance at all between them. I love that you show how a love between a boy and a girl doesn't necessarily need to be romantic . Just pure friendship love
exolotl
25 streak #2
Chapter 14: Omg this story is perfect! I wish more people wrote about friendships, it's quite refreshing finding such a well-written one. Your story is absolutely brilliant, I loved everything about it!! Not gonna lie, it made me wish I had a friendship as beautiful as theirs in my life.
vujuha #3
Chapter 14: This made me remember my highschool friends.After i got the uni we started to talk less and less then our every year meetings gone to zero.I was scared to call them until last summer but i did anyway.I am glad i did.You think you moved on and forgot them but when you meet again the familiarity hits back.Friendship what a wonderfull thing it is.
introverdose
#4
Chapter 14: I have a feeling that I'll reread this so many times, it was beautiful.
lovekiller_tsuna
#5
Chapter 14: Their friendships are beautiful~ For having someone behind us beside our family, it's truly great ^~^
-mars-
#6
Chapter 14: their friendship is really admirable
:) i envy yuji.. i must be nice to have someone who would never give up on you
Kai_milkytea #7
Chapter 14: I love your story T v T it was both refreshing and beautiful. I was honestly hoping for Jongdae and yuji to at least date for a while but I'm extremely satisfied with their friendship. It was very VERY beautiful. I'm kind of envious of the idea of having a friendship like that. Great job with the story! ^^
Cellywelly
#8
Chapter 14: Omg it's done fjsjfntjgng
The chapter where she falls into bad influences and habits made me so sad because seeing a friendship crumble like that, slowly and irreversibly, is so painful ;___; I'm glad they made up
It's so nostalgic to see them as they are now, growing up and the like, but it's great to see that they're still together
This was a looooovely story thank you for writing cx ♡
Cellywelly
#9
Chapter 6: Ah mann I empathize with Jongdae i rlly do, having two older sisters who went off to college waaay before me. It was a real struggle watching them leave after weekends that they came home ;__;
I hope he does find the courage to tell his sis he loves her, maybe before she leaves~
Also couple-in-denial!yudae is the cutest thing ever they click so wellllll cx
Cellywelly
#10
Chapter 3: I love love looooove this fic the characters all feel gorgeously human and fun and balanced and ♡♡♡ their goofy antics are the best
Can't wait for more <3