Iridescence

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One day I will be erased from existence. But I will never let you forget that I once lived.

Foreword

Creating riots.

To create quiet.

The armies in my head;

Making war again.

Their swords are clashing,

Nightmares dashing,

Dreams are crashing,

Burning,

Drowning,

Fighting,

Soaring,

Flying,

Trying...

Dying.

 

Ashes on the ground;

Scattered all around.

Hoping, yearning,

Desires;

Burning,

Fading.

Skip stones,

Float across the wind,

Fly across the keys,

To calmer oceans

Where you won’t be broken.

 

Dust upon the ground,

Never to be found.

Darkness, harshness,

Knives and pens,

Locked chests,

Boxes.

Emptiness swallows up the light

Forever echoes the darkness left behind.

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rique_242 #1
Chapter 5: That last line has me feeling a bit suspicious about Jinki.
Why is his smile sad and bitter when im over here with a smile of a thousand suns?
Insane-sabe
#2
Chapter 5: Hmmmmmm, that last line has me mighty suspicious ◉_◉


Sounds like a hella awesome introduction though. Hi my name is ______ and I got Botox in my Jaw for a while before getting my TITANIUM JAW! LOLOLOL

Q1. Japanese and Korean! I was learning Japanese but I'm one a break right now due to school stress.
Q2. Not a continent but I'm from the Caribbean!
Q3. My favourite word right now is probably Surreal. I thinking of changing my Jongkey fic name to it and now I keep seeing the word everywhere in my mind.
Q4. A story?????? Hmmm my 7 year old cousin is the epitome of annoying. She messages me soooooo often and it's the stupid type of messages "Hey Emi, what you doing?" " Hey lil cuz, I'm going out now, be back tonight." "Okayyyyy." 1 hour later she's back with "Hi, Emi, what you doing?" Like ohhhhhhhhhhhhh my God I just wanna block her on all Social Media sites. Now she's on my other cousin's case. "Hey Muff, what you doing? " "Oh Hey Lil cuz, I'm doing Home work now so I can't chat." "Okay, I'm going to tell my mommy to bring me up by you to play." LIke seriouslyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy, this child gets me soooooo upset. Her parents don't even care who their 7 year old daughter is talking too and it pisses me off sooooo badly. I'm 20 and my mother always wants to know who I talking to and I'm a big woman living on my own. What of this little girl? I plan to have a long talk with her parents when I go visit them.

Anyway...somehow I ended up ranting instead of giving a story LOL

Thanks for Updatingggggg! I'll never unsubscribe! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧
sonnet_sartori #3
YOU UPDATED AT LAST
MORE THAN A YEAR BUT I AM PROUD OF YOU
(im gonna read it now and then leave a comment)
Insane-sabe
#4
Chapter 4: yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Writing can be pretty burdensome especially when people are waiting...

Whateverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, I won't unsubscribe~ I already enjoy this story way too much even with just 4 chapters (so far). And i'll wait FOREVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER!

Q1. I don't know why but I've always been fascinated by sniper rifles... But on a more practical level I'm really interested in knives and knife throwing so for me to actually learn to be an awesome welder then knives are for me.
Q2. Guinness ice cream <3 wait no cookies and creme <3 No ..anything with rum so yeah Guinness :D
Q3. Keyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy, I love him so much! I'll make him carry me shopping for a full makeover! ( maybe then I'll look like a girl pffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffft nahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh)
Q4. Interesting??????? Oh! I'm half Caucasian and half Indian, though i'm turning 20 on Monday people think I'm 23ish (curse you white genes kekeke) and I'm chilling with a Filipino guy who's 21 but looks 16... I'm scared of what people who don't know us might think of us...HA! Just Kidding....he is soooooooooooo cute! and small like... fetus Jonghyun small.

Anyway k byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, Final exams soon~ and I need to practice my Japanese~
sonnet_sartori #5
Chapter 3: ahhh holy this chapter got me right in the feels!!! your writing was anything BUT stressed!! i am speechless, i swear.
the imagery.. the details.. the way you paint with your words...
god you're so amazing *-* and sooo underrated i wanna cry :'(
it doesn't matter that you take long to update... it just matters that you do ^^
other than SHINee? hmm.. maybe f(x) and SNSD.. boy bands i listen to are EXO, GOT7, SuJu, BTS, and a lot of solo artists.. like Ailee, HA:TFELT, Jung Yong Hwa (i dont rly like CNBlue) also wheesung and a looot of others i can't remember right now :P
before kpop, i was into Adele and coldplay and bruno mars and shreya ghoshal (hindi singer) also adam lambert <3 and soo many more ^^
i had a stage when i was into opera music and violin... i still am, i think?
how did your tests go??
aniangel07
#6
Chapter 3: I like this story more and more. :)
great chapter again.^^

shinee is my favorite group, of yourse I listen to other groups too, like exo, f(x) and so on. by shinee is the only groups I buy albums from. I also buy exo albums. other tan that I dont like a lot groups. there are some songs I like from groups I usually am not listening to, like dalshabet. I really like "someone like u".^^ for other music, I`m pretty much open to anything. I like pop, but sometimes listen to grunge/metal too. I kind of like electrinic too. :D
Insane-sabe
#7
Chapter 2: Your story was recommended to be recently. Just 2 chapters in and I'm already very intrigued.
Well my favorite colour is Black as well and I live in the Tropics but it's been rainy these past few days.

Good luck with writing!
miinnehxD #8
Chapter 2: this story is super cool and ure super cool too ??1!!1?1!?!1

my favourite colour is black and navy blue, and where i live there's only sunshine or rain so i'd say rainy bc i don't really have much choices ahahahaha. good luck and fighting !!
DingKey
#9
Chapter 2: My favorite colors are blue and black.
I also like Snow/ Rainy whether. There are no season changes here,but I still love winter.

I don't mind if you're lazy,just update as soon as possible. Being lazy is a bad excuse. Loved it so far!
sonnet_sartori #10
Chapter 2: my favorite colour is pink, but it changes everyday
my favorite weather is heavy, dark rain. We get lots of that where i live ^^
your story is pretty amazing. the part where taemin hugged kibum made me cry.. taemin who loves to touch people and kibum who hates it... it just got me right in the feels.
is the Big House a kinda rehabilitation place? i don't get that part.
i love all your characters...
but your writing is a tad bit confusing. maybe it's your poetic way of writing, but i had to re-read some parts to understand it.
i like it ^^