I really love how much you ramble on yixing's potential. I am also think that the role of er yue fitting him so much. beauty and y on stage, yet handsome and hot off stage. and I can't wait to see him wearing beijing opera make up and costume. anyway I love your story, it makes me curious about how is he in real life ^^

Chapter 1: "show me exactly how much you missed me" AHHH MISS YOU MUCH

and omg when you were describing the stranger being captivated by yixing, i was so scared and my heart was racing and then you revealed it was sehun and i caught my breath back and let out a sigh of relief and i was like "SEHUN! OMG IT WAS YOU?"

Chapter 1: Oh wow...yes!! I don't know how I missed this one.
I've fallen in love with the way you've portrayed Yixing here.
It's when I read fanfics like these and watch Yixing perform on stage I wonder who is Yixing exactly. Coz the next minute you see him speaking in an adorable voice with aegyo(like the footage when they rode the pharaoh's fury and he spoke in this extremely cute voice ><) I can't... Gosh. It's almost like he has a dual personality and I can't seem to decide which one I like more.

Chapter 1: OH MAI GOSH I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE WEBDRAMA >.<

and thanks for the idea, now i'ma spend sleepless nights wondering about a side-story =P

you've written this very nicely tho!