Love Song

Description

Sooyoung is torn between two women. She has to choose between the two most important women in her life. One person is her first love, the other is someone who has supported her through her darkest days. Any choice she makes will turn out painful for one of these women. It'll be a Soo-centered love story with other guest appearances as well. WARNING: Tons of Soo-love!

Foreword

Characters:

Main - Sooyoung Yuri Jessica

Choi Sooyoung

·         A 21-year-old college junior

·         Major in Pre-medical

·         Work at Skylight as a “companion” to pay for tuition and expenses

·         Sulli's awesome cousin

·         Has a direct personality and is total shikshin

·         Had a past with Jessica, still loves her very much

Kwon Yuri

·         A 22-year-old college senior

·        Recently returned from studying abroad

·         Sooyoung’s co-worker, best friend, and -provider

Jung Sooyeon (Jessica)

·         A 22-year-old graduate

·         Eldest Jung offspring

·         Recently returned from the US to attend medical school

·         Sooyoung's first love

·         Yonghwa and Krystal’s unni

Minor characters –  

Jung Soojung (Krystal)

·         A 17-year-old high school student

·         Jessica's sister and Sulli's girlfriend

Choi Jinri (Sulli)

·         A 17-year-old high school student

·         Sooyoung's cousin/wingwoman and Krystal's girlfriend

Kim Hyoyeon

·         A 22-year-old college senior

·         Major in Kinesthesiology

·         Sooyoung’s co-worker

Im Yoona

·         One of Sooyoung’s client

·         Heartbroken when Seohyun agreed to an arrange marriage to Yonghwa

Seo Joohyun (Seohyun)

·         The reason Yoona hired Sooyoung

·         Still loves Yoona, but gave into her parents' request

Lee Soonkyu (Sunny)

·         A 22-year-old college senior majoring in Agriculture

·         Sooyoung and Sulli's cousin

·         Hyomin's girlfriend, with whom she operates a farm

Park Sunyoung (Hyomin)

·         A 22-year-old detective

·         Sunny's girlfriend, with whom she operates a farm

Hwang Miyoung (Tiffany)

·         A 22-year-old office worker

·         Taeyeon's girlfriend, with whom she shares co-ownership of a cafe

·         Went to high school with Jessica and Sooyoung, who was her first love

Kim Taeyeon

·         A 23-year-old woman

·         Tiffany's girlfriend, with whom she shares co-ownership of a cafe

Others:

Jung Yonghwa - Middle Jung offspring, engaged to Seohyun per his parents' arrangement

Song Victora - Sulli's tutor, Krystal's threat

Park Jiyeon - Hyomin's cousin, Sooyoung's enemy

Park Jiyoung (Kahi)

·         A 30-year-old businesswoman

·         President of Skylight Social Services

·         Jungah’s lover

Kim Jungah

·         A 28-year-old lawyer

·         Attorney for Skylight Social Services

·         Kahi’s lover

 

Description:

This is my first attempt at a complicated love triangle. The character profiles will be updated periodically, as well as new profiles to be added. I hope everyone will enjoy this story because I am excited about writing it. Please read and review! Thanks for reading ^_^

Disclaimer: I use alot of graphics/photos and I do not own them or have any credit for them. Unless stated otherwise!

Violetkaya
Hi ... I know this story has been on pause for ... well, a long time! I hope to finish it this year since the pandemic has given me some time to dive back into writing. Thank you for everyone who supported this story since way back.

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ddoyounggie_5
#1
#stillhopingforanendingevenifitskindaimpossible
#sobsforever
kakaoshake #2
i think ive reread this fic like 3 times already lol i hope you can continue it !
jaekwons
#3
(sorry one last comment, but i just had to spazz that) the truth or dare scene was so well done! i love how you built the tension so well, despite having a cast of strangers in one room (their only connection to each other being sooyoung's friends). the tension was well set-up that even i felt like sinking to my chair as the game went on, and even hyoyeon's attempt at diffusing the tension didn't make me feel less awkward. i *love* how you made tiffany and yuri play mind-games with each other. that final "nudge" taeyeon gave sooyoung (asking her to answer nothing but truth) was such a subtle but good move to put taeyeon's character into perspective. hyomin giving sica that boost of confidence with her line was also great. little stuff like that really set the atmosphere well, and i'd have to commend you for writing one of the (probably) best chapters in this fic lol.
jaekwons
#4
also, i'm curious as to what happened to yoona afterwards. i've got a bad feeling about how she's going to stir during seohyun's wedding.

and i think i have an inkling of what yuri sent jessica. it's a desperate move, and i hope to find out more about yuri's past (and her introspection) later on.

(tbh, a part of me want soosic to end up together because it seems to be the more stable relationship, and another part of me kind of wants it to end with bittersweet soori, with yuri promising sooyoung to come back to her once she's gotten better/can manage her psychological problems and all that lol)

hope you update soon! one of the more complex fics i've read in a while, in terms of character relationships.
jaekwons
#5
first the technical stuff.
there are a few misspellings and grammatical errors here and there. nevertheless, the way you manipulate the language to make the story flow smoothly really shows your skill. i'd recommend double-checking the errors or having someone beta-read for you so as to not clutter the piece, because they do tend to distract from the flow of the narrative. :-)

one of the main strengths of this story is the dialogue.
the way you choose the words spoken by each character, to how you execute it in written form are perfect. conversations between characters flow smoothly, and interactions don't seem forced or awkward. in fact, the dialogue sounds realistic in my head.

another strength: characterisation. one of my favourite relationships that you've developed well in this story would be sootae's relationship, especially since you managed to flesh out both sooyoung's and taeyeon's characters so well through the short time the latter stayed at the former's apartment. i also like how you've made even the minor characters, such as jiyeon and hyomin, very endearing to the readers. how you characterised yuri is interesting, imo, which brings to my last point...

the final strength: how well you've constructed the dilemma. one thing i absolutely dislike about most fics written in a love triangle dilemma is how one relationship is almost always painfully written as the author's favorite. here, however, that's not the case. i can actually see sooyoung's character jiving well with jessica's and yuri's. additionally, their equally meaningful pasts together kind of makes me root for both soosic and soori at the same time. however, objectively, i do see the faults of each couple: soori (specifically on yuri's side) is more rooted in desperation rather than affection, and can be toxic, while soosic is rooted in the past. a dilemma to my shipper heart indeed.

anyway, i hope you haven't given up on this story yet! i'll be waiting patiently. :-)
Sooshi009
#6
Chapter 33: Hi author, I know it's been 3 years..but pls pls pls do continue disss huhuhu. I have been re reading this for a lot of times already and this last chapter really makes me so curious, it's like an itch that I want to scratch and scratch just to know wat that FREAKIN piece of picture is all about. I can't sleep, can't eat, can't think straight for 3 years just becos of that freakin pic... nah I'm just kidding ^^v hahaha. But srsly it still bugs me off sometimes xD. Pls author even just one chapter, that "real dramatic Chapter 34" you speak of. pls do continue and I will continue to wait for youuuu. ilysm author mwa mwa

love,
Sooshi009
SooYulSic #7
Chapter 33: Pls continue this fanfic. It contains my soosic and soori feels...
SMYoung
#8
Where are you author ssi? I'm still here to support this fic that is one of my favorites. I hope you won't abandon this. I'll wait for your update.
MisSnsd12
#9
Author PLEASE comeback and don't leave this story hanging. It's too good to be left like this. Please please please just finish this story and you can live peacefully after.
choisoofanyhwang
#10
Chapter 33: PLEASE UPDATE :(((((((((( I need to know what happens next! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE :(( I beg of you, author-shi :(