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4xU. The ComeBack: AWARD SHOW SEASON!
4xU's SWAN PRINCESS
Hey all! This is the REVIEW page, where I'll be reviewing your characters for SWAN PRINCESS. 
My reviews are pretty straightforward, and what I believe needs fixing will be in red so you can find it easy! 
Thanks and good luck, I hope to see those apps soon ~
DANNIE'S NOTES

 

刘小鸭 : Liu Xiaoya
DREAM
Review: Caaaat, thank you so much for being the first applicant of the Swan Princess plotline ^^ Without further ado, here is the review for Xiaoya!
Character: I love that she's Chinese-Korean, and Elkie is so cute and pretty omg! Good choices :) Her nicknames are great too, I love she has the "smol" nickname and the resting face lololol.
 #smolsquad I'm feeling it. Moving on! Her appearance is really interesting too, with her not being "visually beautiful" but her charm being what makes her pretty! :O If she's chosen, I'd def use the makeup and hair thing often lol. "wait we just saw you two hours ago what happened with your hair" "idk i was bored lolol" I like it a lot ^^ Her personality is pretty brief, but you do give me something to work with. If it isn't too much trouble, would you mind listing specific traits that I could bounce off of for positive/negatives? It personally gives me more of a visual. You did mention she was a tsundere, which makes me giggle bc with her "poker/ face" persona, it totally fits and makes me smile. It's really cute that she's super funny but no one excluding her friends know -- does that mean that the public is like "....uhm, hello?" It reminds me a lot of Krystal from f(x), Kyungri from Nine Muses and HyunA! :)))
Background: You made me laugh at the fact that her parents were like "nah we just like ducks and you were a baby lmaooo" because honestly, some parents are like that haha! Aw, she was bullied for dark skin and different looks :(( Definitely an ugly duckling situation, so I appreciate the ties you put in there! And it continued to her time in the States, that also . And now that she's Korea, her mom's family was v accepting of her! That's so sweet! yO SHE AND NAMJOON ARE BROS I'M SCREAMING. I can see Chase knowing Xiaoya bc of her ties to BTS as well, lol. So Xiaoya and Namjoon worked on music together? How did Bang PD get ahold of the music? But oh wow, she was a composer/producer for FAERIETALE??? I love that idea! So she'd already be pretty close to the girls, huh? Another thing -- I don't see her opinions/interactions with the 4xU girls. Mind looking at their apps/the member page and fixing that for me? OOooh, so instead of plastic surgery, puberty just hit her late. It does happen lol. So, as a clarification, how did she get into 4xU then? She became a trainee but you don't mention how she'd become a member. Besides that, I really like her background -- it's pretty normal and I like that she was recognized for her talents instead of her face first! :D
Love Interest: YOU GAVE ME SO MUCH POWER OMG. First off, loooove JHope, what a precious sunflower. I can see the chaos of BTS with JHope and Suga and Namjoon having these like, powwow sessions about feelings with Namjoon being the voice of reason lolol. Because you left it more open to me, there's nothing to really critique but know that much hilarity will ensue if she's chosen!
ETC: Her stagename and meaning is so cute I love it! Okay, so BOTH ideas I lOVE. Hiphop unit AND Grace being a four membered group. It was my original idea, but I wanted to really to give the new applicants some freedom ~ If you fix up the things in red, I'll accept Dream! I think she's a very cute and unique character with a lot of potential and steady ties to the group :) Thanks for applying again ~~
Background information
Face Claim CLC's Elkie
Position Swan Princess
Love Interest BTS's JHOPE
Birthdate
  • January 11th, 1994
Persona The Hidden Gem
 
Status
  • PENDING...
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 장은별/ Jang Eunbyul
EUNBYUL
Review: Hiya Liam! Thanks for applying for the SWAN PRINCESS plotline~ Let's get started with your review, shall we? :)
CHARACTER: First of all, Hyelim is GORGEOUS and totally fits the visual aspect that I have in mind! Her appearance looks good, I love that she's the effortless kind of fashionisita ~
Onto her personality:
fashionable isn't a personality trait imo, might i suggest using "creative" or "confident"? Also, your traits don't seem to completely match up with the personality you've given me. Could you fix that up a bit? For example, use "honest" or "versatile" in her postive traits. Maybe decide whether she's mature or childish for her negatives, you can spin either to your advantage. I do really like her personality list and descriptions, but they don't match up so I'm not sure which one to base the character off of? :O 

BACKGROUNDHer background is also a little bit of an issue... it'd make more sense if her sister was older, so signing her up for singing courses or letting her tag along etc. makes more sense. Also, she was born in 1991 so she wouldn't wouldn't be an infant in 2009, she'd be 18. I'm also not sure when she started training, you say she was 20 but also say she was at YG before that...? It also didn't say how she came to know 4xU or her closeness with each of the girls, or how she knows Yoo Jaesuk and SNSD. I hope you don't think I'm being too picky, I just really want to make sure I understand your character! With her likes/dislikes/tidbits, I love them! There's no problem here. I'm really into that she was apart of PROD101, that might be why Woollim chose her to be apart of 4xU!
LOVE INTEREST: Awww Leo and her were schoolmates! I can believe that, and the fact that they fell into that sort of semi-long distance relationship makes me reeeeally happy, it's very realistic for the idol industry. I would, however, be pushing back on when the coupel revealed themselves. It kinda seems like the last two stepping stones for this relationship are missing. How'd they start dating? Why did they want to come forward so readily when Leo is so shy and private about his life? This couple could be a very cute opposites couple, but I just need a liiiittle more on how it developed. :) 
ETC/Ending: I do think that Eunbyul has the potential to be a very well developed character, she just needs some more polish and little adjustments to make her more well rounded! :D Let me know when you make fix the issues I had in red and I'll re-read and accept her!
Background information
Face Claim Wonder Girl's Hyelim 
Position Swan Princess
Love Interest VIXX's Leo
Birthdate
  • December 19, 1991
Persona Stunning Miss J
 
Status
  • ACCEPTED
 

 

 

류소민: RYU SOMIN 
FAYZA (패이자)
Review: Sien!! Thank you so much for applying, let's get to your review! Yours will be a little different from the other two, broken up by character (includes background), relationships, forti, and love interest, followed by ending comments!
CHARACTER: First off, BOTH of your fc are sooo cute -- I just love Uji's look more, if that's okay? Onwards then! So, she's from the US originally! That's really cool, she can get along with JJ and Sophie then, as they use English as well :) I love that although she's the visual, she's the fashion hole lololol. Omg, her personality is like Clara's!! She seems like a sweetheart and I know having someone quieter might give Su-chin a chance to relax lololol
A rich girl huh??? I would've never guess from her personality, but that's super interesting! Even though she's rich, she was often lonely and kids can be cruel to those different from them, aw :( Poor thing even stopped singing because of it... Oh wow! She made the decision in order to go under the knife to further her career, and the CEO encouraged it... wow! 
OH I LOVE THIS IDEA SO MUCH YOU HAVE NO IDEA. For Fayza to be apart of a group sort of side by side to 4xU.... Aaaaah I love it so much!! Forti seems like a really cool idea, like KARD or Lucky J! I also like how she came into 4xU -- it makes sense with the story :) No complaints here! 
She's got a lot of likes/dislikes, which is great because I'd have a lot to work with if she was chosen! cURSING IS BAD OOOH BOY IS SHE IN FOR A RIDE WITH SOME OF THE MEMBERS LOLOL she'll protect Clara from being exposed to such things I'm guessing ahahaha~
RELATIONSHIPS: Even though her parents weren't around, it's nice to see they support their children! I love that her older brother is close by Woollim to look out for her, and her youngest is the classic "i'm a little but i still love you" lmao
Her best friend is suuuuper cute, omg. and uuugh missed gay connections oh well, they're still super cute and I'm here for it! Oooooh tension between her and Venus -- that makes sense since Venus is more careful around others. I'm sure it'll work out though if she is chosen! 
FORTI: Okay, onto what really made me excited about your app -- the co-ed group she originally debuted with! 
I ACTUALLY GOT REALLY SAD ABOUT LEX AND EUIJIN LEAVING OMG. They're both actually on the unit and in that group, which will work well for the future (hopefully) if Fayza's chosen ~ Thank you for including their discography. I quite like this idea, maybe there's the chance that a Forti comeback is within sight hehehe :D
LOVE INTEREST: Awwww yes I was really excited about this part too, tbh. He seems like a great match for Fayza and I'm laughing at the idea of Lex and Bohee just quietly fighting over Somin in the bg thinking she can't hear when she totally can hahaha! Oooh, possessive huh? Hopefully that doesn't get too aggressive! I like the visual you gave me of their contrasts -- I can totally see Fayza and the petite shy princess and then Lex is her mafia boyfriend, it's actually quite endearing! He also knows the new girls, which is really cool. He's probs like "THESE ARE YOUR FRIENDS THEY ARE FINE PLS PROTECT HER" and scares the hell outta Clara xD
ETC/Ending comments: Fayza wasn't a character I was expecting, but I've totally fallen in love with her! It's obvious you put a lot of care and thought into every aspect of her, and so I can't find a mistake at all! Fayza is officially accepted, thank you sooo much for applying and best of luck ~
Background information
Face Claim BESTie's Uji
Position Swan Princess
Love Interest BIGFLO's Lex
Birthdate
  • April 16th, 1993
Persona Victorious Beauty
 
Status
  • ACCEPTED!
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OK MISO (옥미소)
MISO (미소)
Review: sHAY Let's get started shall we? :D 
CHARACTER: fIRST OF ALL I'M SO WEAK FOR MIJOO OMG. #realgay bYE moving on ahem -- The style and appearance section is still blank? Appearance is fine if there's nothing differing from Mijoo and Miso, but I'd like to know if she's like, a fashion disaster or crowds the dorm with clothes from Paris lololol ~ Her personality is thorough and I love it. She's got all the makings to be that it-girl tbh. I sense she'd actually fight someone (ahemgigimaybe???) if she's chosen to get a thing she wants. I just love her overall energy that I'm getting, because she'd be sort of a boost to the group if she's chosen!
BACKGROUND: I'M LAUGHING AT THE 4XHER PUN WHAT A GOOD JOKE. Uhm, this girl has pLANS AND IS NOT ABOUT TO LET ANYONE IN HER WAY OH MY GOD??? She's like, an anti-hero almost omg. Like she did swoop in but not out of the goodness of her heart. OMG LIKE SHARPAY FROM HIGH SCHOOL MUSICAL i'm sorry I got excited there. ahem. Her relationships are good too -- it's really varied amongst the girls and she'd play well and keep things interesting in the group! :O
Her trivia and things are good to go as well,I'll just mention three things here:
1) BEES.
2) "One does not become a Hallyu star by stubbornly sticking to Korean"
3) uHM AUAL HETEROROMANTIC IS STILL IN THE LGBTQ+ COMMUNITY AND I'M HERE FOR THIS.
LOVE INTEREST: Aaaah it's an OC, and with Sandeul as the faceclaim. B1A4's Solo Day album was in my top 10 for like, two years straight (and now I wanna listen to it. May the madness begin again lolol) hE SOUNDS LIKE A VERY GOOD EGG INDEED. Physics is great lololol is it really, Yoo Seok???? IS IT??? 
ANYWAYS, this poor boi is neighbors with 4xU omg. The things he's heard and the fact that he hasn't called the cops is honestly a miracle lol 
UHM I LOVE THIS RELATIONSHIP??? IT'S PURE AND GOOD AND I'M HONESTLY WONDERING WHY MY GF DOESN'T LIKE GOING OUTDOORS BC I WANNA DO THIS LMAO. (i guess i'm yoo seok and she's miso in this situation bYE) So yes. I approve of this relationship whole heartedly and love everything about it. 
ENDING COMMENTS: I feel like a proud mom of your characters???? Idk, I just love the way you write tbh and Miso is soo different from Sophie and I think it's great. YOU'RE great. (it also might have to do with the fact that it's 1:30AM when I'm writing this but I couldn't sleep so here we are...) Besides the appearance/fashion thing (which isn't a hUGE deal, just some nice good old info that'd help me out!) I'm going to list Miso as ACCEPTED. ((honestly i love miso so much if she's not chosen as the new member she will be around bc urkljngasfbye))
Background information
Face Claim Lovelyz' Mijoo
Position Swan Princess
Love Interest Yoo Seok (FC: B1A4's Sandeul)
Birthdate
  • May 6th, 1995
Persona Ambitious Sass Queen
 
Status
  • ACCEPTED!
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Sòng Lì Yǔ | 宋丽羽 
Tián | 甜
Review: Omg Fei this review is literally later than the time of the year it is and I'M SO SORRY.... But anyways, we're jumping in and I'm excited!!!
CHARACTER: Okay!!! I love Jing Tian ((i think you used her as a first option for your app for Cinderella, so I'm sure you know this, but yes!! so pretty!!!)) I also love her name, it's so pretty! Yeees I love the sort of unique style she has, it's verastile and I love the piercings! Her personality is also very interesting, and concise!! However, I do get her overall identity and if she were chosen, I'm sure you'd let me know if she were a bit off!!! I love that she's Chinese-Korean, so no problems so far~
For her trivia, me @ the Former EXO members too, tho I think Rye has me beat lmao xD I like her trivia, it makes sense and ties into her story well, as well as what I had in mind for the Swan Princess plotline :))) p.s. heteroflexible SCREAMS i'm here for this bless you
BACKGROUND: Brb sobbing bc that's so sad but also really unique of how she got to be beautiful!!! AND SHE'S COUSINS WITH SOLAR I'M -- Her name change is also understandable as well! It's really sweet that Solar and Tian are so close, honestly, it makes me feel warm that even though Tian's been through so much, she has Solar to fall back on. Also these relationships -- I'm loving it??? I can see her interactions with all the girls clearly as well as her family! :D ((also yes pls spoil clara even tho she should be a spoiled brat bc of all the attention and praise bUT WHO KNOWS #spoilersdon'tgetttooexcitednow)) 
LOVE INTEREST(S): UHMMM??? I'M SO INTO THE FACT THAT YOU COLLABED WITH ANOTHER MEMBER FOR THIS EVEN IF IT DIDN'T WORK OUT. They're so sweet and precious that I want to write a story about them regardless of if Tian's chosen or not uhm??? I'm just so happy of the unique love lines and plots everyone comes up with <3 <3 <3
Moving on to Mr. Park ~ ((Honestly, I've been bopping to him and Britney Spears which is weird I know BUT it got me motivated lmao)) IU5BKLTEARL TRUE WHY IS CHASE FRIENDS WITH SO MANY RAPPERS call her out tbh be friends with more people girl. I'm just -- he's so sweet to her and I'm just???? wow??? and then Tian's understandable precautions omg omg omg omg... Anyways I'm gushing a lots. 
ENDING NOTES: Uhm, nothing's wrong here, honestly, I'm so distraught because I have so many amazing apps for consideration and it's like Cinderella all over again omg??? BUT, I love it at the same time TT^TT I love Tian and the thought you put into her as a character and her love interest/development being intertwined with her story!! Tian is ACCEPTED, thank you so much for applying Fei! 
Background information
Face Claim Jing Tian
Position Snow Princess
Love Interest SANGMI / Jay Park
Birthdate
  • Feb. 21st, 1991
Persona 4D Angel
 
Status
  • ACCEPTED
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Applicant #
Review: 
Background information
Face Claim TBA
Position Swan Princess
Love Interest TBA
Birthdate
  • TBA
Persona TBA
 
Status
  • TBA
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Applicant #
Review: 
Background information
Face Claim TBA
Position Swan Princess
Love Interest TBA
Birthdate
  • TBA
Persona TBA
 
Status
  • TBA
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Applicant #
Review: 
Background information
Face Claim TBA
Position Swan Princess
Love Interest TBA
Birthdate
  • TBA
Persona TBA
 
Status
  • TBA
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symphonies
I'm so sorry that I haven't been consistent -I hope you guys are still on board for this story bc I'm here ! I'm ready to write !
I kept trying to write during school but it was not happening...
BUT, now that school's released me, I'm itching to write about all our girls again ;u;

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MingyuCarat
#1
Ssup ^^
You-gave-us-a-galaxy
#2
Chapter 1: Yo! I haven't been around much due to uni but I'm down to find out how the girls are doing!!! I hope you're enjoying freedom!
spontaneity
#3
i'm still here and still would love to read more about the girls ^^
i know school is a sometimes so dw too much about the lack of updates :)
spontaneity
#4
Chapter 32: the girls at the awards show was everything omg lmao
altho its scary to see how they can still get hate for just checking up on their friends for a bit
even if other groups were doing the same

but hints of the new memberrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
gigi and 4xu comeback at the same time issssssss yikes tho omg
i'm kinda nervous to read about their interactions
i dont think we've seen gigi and the original group actually seeing each other in person since what happened
and with how the members reacted to just her being mentioned during one of their interviews....

also jb purposely searching for jj to catch up with her ayyy
and sehun being alll shy about complimenting venus xD
i wonder whats up with suga and chase again tho....
was starting to miss sophie and btob interactions haha
OOOOH SANGMI got to meet mamamooo!!!! i'm looking forward to 4xu and mamamoo's friendship hehe
congrats to the girls making it as nominations!!
spontaneity
#5
Chapter 31: look who's finally back around to comment lel
i love clara's determination throughout this chapter, it was really nice to read about!
jyp's reactions to her were so amusing too haha
and chase's lil quip at the end of the chapter xD

everyone coming over to spazz over the maknae was adorable too haha
nice to see the girls making friends in the idol world and interacting with em hehe
per usual, i'd love to seeing them interact more often, and maybe make even more idol friends

and ofc, i love the interactions btween sehun and venus!!
call me biased haha
but they're so open to each other it seems like
i really like how they feel ok telling each other their inner thoughts and feelings!
and ofc kaistal makes it all the better
altho the two have broken up in rl, i will still go down w this ship lmao
MingyuCarat
#6
I love the new chapters to be honest and I can only say welcome to the new girl so WELCOME SOMINNIE!!! Anyway I love how the girls acted with Gigi and how pissed naeun was surprising some of the girls a bit as they knew Naeun was friends with her. And I mean chaos at the award ceremonies I love it. I just wish there is a chapter or two with the girls love interests and maybe, because naeun is my character, focus a bit more on myungsoo and hers relationship with how they hurt each other and the girls helping a crying naeun with somin surprised over it or something but also like show me some love to the other loveliness I'm dying for love
smile_for_roo
#7
AaaaaaWWWWwwWwwWwW Yeah --
I'm sorry I didn't turn in my app in time, my shifts at work have been messed with and I'm trying to figure out how to balance everything orz
So yeah, to the chapters~
Variety 04: IDK if I commented or not, but omg this is so cute -- I honestly ship DoubleJB more than Hyunsik and JJ X'D ;; they're just so naturally playful and competitive, it makes for a fun relationship I think ~ But I love the way you used an actual episode of the Real GOT7 for this! :D Also, YES JJ GET REVENGE FOR CHASE LMAO Bambam is such a trouble maker he deserves it --- all in all, it's super cute, and I hope that comments don't get to JJ like it did to Tina :(((
Music Show 02: It's soooooo cute omg???? Tina doing one last performance and all of 4xU there -- i'm in tears leave me TT^TT Then Clara's interest in the show outside of 4xU -- I can be both sides, but I'm glad Clara went with her gut and participated. The girls do tend to baby her and she gets enough of that from her brother, hm? alSO VENUS AND SEHUN I ship it so hard omg, they're so cute and sarcastic together, also his shaggy hair recently is like A+ fam yesssssssss AND THEN THEY GO ALL OUT AND MAKE A VIEWING PARTY OMG OMG OMG That's so cute?!??! I love that you used Sohee as Clara's persona for KPOPSTAR -- they def look like Jeonghan and Sohee was meant to be apart of a group before this. c: Good job of making everything work together !!
Awards 01: YES AWARDS SEASON, I'M SO HAPPY FOR THIS. That's so cute, but it's sad that Clara won't be able to participate :c YOU INCLUDING THEIR STYLING I'M SO HAPPY. Fashion is the best, tbh, and I'm laughing -- Chase would def hate the puffy princess gowns, despite how pretty they look xD Jinsol coming back and being cute aaaaah too cute!!! Also LMAO at the awards show -- ofc these girls would be bouncing around!! Esp Chase omg -- she's like "why would i??? stay with these girls??? i live with them???" ahahahaha brb crying over all the interactions . you write them so naturally, I'm honestly surprised these girls don't exist irl!!!
awards 02: OMG SBS WITH THEM PERFORMING AND GIGI -- 's about to hAPPEN??? I'm so happy you made Tina's departure the focus of Chase's and Yoongi's struggle vs. Chase and Lay's coming together, it really fits with how you write!!! cLARA SLAYING OFC -- Sohee's such a good match for her, she's well rounded and so is Clara from what I've read -- is Clara going to continue under her stagename or go under Jinsol when she's done???? :'O oH GIGI'S HERE AND SANGMI ABOUT TO BEAT HER I'M HERE FOR IT --- 23 is a bop omg but gigi singing it??? it just kinda rubs salt into the wound omg -- and then the sUSPENSE WITH THE NEW MEMBER (though i read it now rip) omg hyunsik and jj is literally a winter kdrama moment aaaaaaah that's so cute?!?? ROOKIE QUEENS, ROOKIE QUEENS, ROOKIE QUEENS!!!
Reveal 05: FAYZAAAAA!! I haven't read her app but she seems so cute -- her quiet nature and easily distracted ness aaaaah no wonder su-chin is happy lololol, one less sophie and chase to worry about xD her answers were really unique, actually, she loves hip hop to dance and be apart of as a group but personally she loves classical??? (i lied i read her app a little lmao) aLNJEWSUIFJKD DO KARD SONGS I'M BEGGING PLS a co-ed group with kard songs would be absolutely wild omg omg omg aND SOMIN/FAYZA BEING SO HONEST ABOUT HERSELF LIKE YOU GO GIRL OMG
ohhhh we get kinda serious -- you really write the reaction to venus and her sister's passing so well: the shock, the "what ifs" ... aaaaah, i'd love to see it work out between venus and fayza but with how long it took naeun and sangmi to recouncile.... y i k e s
as always, you never fail to impress me with your writing skills! congrats on re-entering uni in feb, i hope you do well and still find time to update us with your writing and these fics ^^
HiRitu
#8
Chapter 34: Oh my goodness I saw this when I woke up and I saw Euijin and Lex and I simply screamed! I was so worried that Somin wouldn't be chosen because there were some amazing apps, but thank you so so much for choosing her after all <3 You made me so happy!

You really do portray her shyness and not being easy with words well! I also really love how you portray her boys Lex and Euijin.

Wow... The tw part about venus' sister got me though... You've written that one out so well. I can understand Venus, but she should really give Somin a chance. Not because she's my character but because she's a good person, feels bad about it herself and did nothing wrong. I'm glad they are going to talk

I'm so excited for MAMA though! I can't wait to see what's going to happen! Thank you again!
spontaneity
#9
oooh i'm exxcited to seee the new member!
and as always, sorry for the slow activity on my end
i'll be sure to comment on all the chapters soon!
UrangUtang
#10
Chapter 33: I don't think I've told you this, but I really like how you cycle through time in your chapters. You've got this really organic way of little skips of time and you're not afraid to show short burts and scenes and that's something I struggle with myself so A+++ good ! And I always love the interactions between each other and other idols, you're so good at dialogue and interactions, teach me senpai!

Sophie noticing that something is off with Chase makes me ;A; THEIR FRIENDSHIP. And aaaw Tina is back for a tiny bit! It's really sweet to include her in this segment and still show that she cares about the group and Jinsol despite being outies. And aaaaw look at the baby performing and gaining confidence in her skill!!

EEEY GAYO. Chase OMG now is not the time for shade hanini! NAEUN OH MY GOD WHAT IS THIS SAVAGERY. I'm so proud I could cry! 'You can't hit her you'll get in trouble' omg Sangmi! I love it when her own savagery comes out and man the tension here is palpable. Oh man the performance was so cute! And then Gigi of course. Man 23 is such an amazing song and IU is such an amazing performer, but it does get a more sinister twist with GiGi at the helm. I can just imagine the amounts of 4xU reaction fancams for that performance despite the fact that the official cameras skillfully avoided them. That's rough man. Sophie and Chase!! Of course they have soju under their bed oh my god little s. But yeesss Chase open up to auntie Sophie!

Aaand here we go with the Swan Princess, I love how you mention each of the hopefuls in-universe as well with a little bit about why they were of interest to the company and how the girls think about them. Aaaah keeping us in suspense!

JJ and Hyunsik are so cute omg, of course the idiot makes the rehearsal that much more fun. He's always had a good balance of professional and professional loon <3 I swear I could hear three different kdrama OSTs playing at once as she warmed his hands omg. ADORABLE. 'Thankfor caring, Soojin' AAAAND that's when my heart melted. Oh my god I'm such TRASH for cute romance like this ;A; THAT WAS SO CUTE.

BACK to intoxicated SPILLAGE. OH NO CHASE HANINI. I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT. And of course Sophie is like ???HOWDEAL and at the same time takes no prisoners oh my god my child. 'Oh my god I swear if you're about to tell me Mark or Peniel is about to come into the story'. THAT'S MY GIRL. But maaaan that's such a drama mess, I feel bad for Chase but also giiiirl. Love yourself xD But also yeeeesss Sophie shaming! And more Chase shaming cause girl, appreciate your female friends more I can guarantee you they are amazing. Much well-deserved shaming has been done that night. I approve.

Happy new year!! I hope it will treat you better than last ;A; I'm honestly just really content with all the chapters you've given us so far! I'm such a er for cute romance and you write it so well, but I also love the plot moving forward and the character development and everything. So, really, just keep doing what you're doing! (Insert Luna here)