Shards Of Silver & Black

Description

Lay wandered through deserted cities, beautiful gardens and glass castles. Kyungsoo's mind wasn't like any other he had seen before though. And that's when pretty dreams can turn dangerous real fast. But Lay was trained for the resistance... or so he thought.

Foreword

 

“Who are you?”
Zhang Yixing.
“Lay.” he evenly said.

“Why are you still here? It’s very late.”
I’m here because you’re sick.
“I forgot something.”

 

Lay wandered through deserted cities, beautiful gardens and glass castles.
All the while searching for the infection that was eating Kyungsoo up from inside.
And as things were, he had to go much deeper than that.


 

 

Hello everyone~
I'm back with an idea that has been ghosting around my mind for quite a while now.
It was mainly inspired by One Ok Rock's 'Deeper Deeper'.
http://www.jpopsuki.tv/video/ONE-OK-ROCK---Deeper-Deeper-%2528english-sub%2529/18e82097b43ed6ea706557e050eee210
Though while finalizing the plot Sky-Hi's 'Seaside Bound' and Ravi's 'Ghost' were also on replay.

This story is only self-beta'd and I'm no native speaker so please bear with me? :<
If you wanna point out some mistakes, I'll gladly take your advise~

Love,
Sugar-and-Salt ♥
 

P.S.: This beauty of a poster as well as the background have been created by Sarah from the Run Run Run Graphicshop ♥ Check them out if you're interested in pretty Exo posters(and it's ChanKai. Just click it, seriously.*what, who's biased?*)

P.P.S.: As mentioned before, this story has been written with a contest in mind.
Therefore I can now happily say it's an entry to the Wicked Writing Contest - do pay it a visit if you're interested~

Back to Top ↑

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Mistycal #1
Omg so i upvoted this story but forgot it existed??? Gonna (re?)read it!!
mhawthorne07 #2
Chapter 1: Oh man I was so sure that Lay and Kyungsoo were two personalities battling inside Lay’s head for a while! I liked the ending a lot though.
irealyshouldgotobed #3
Chapter 1: oh god, this is sooo good! The storytelling is complex and intriguing - almost like "Inception " but i could actually follow THIS storyline without getting a confusion headache. You are Clearly very very talented, i am glad i got the opportunity to read this. <3
Stina_2015 #4
Wahhh!!!!! That was absolutely fantastic! As others have stated, your imagery and ability to keep readers guessing were exceptional in this story. Like seriously, i was over here yelling at my phone and shizz while reading this while my family members just stared at me like i was crazy lol i wish i was more educated in literature and stuff too so that i could leave more insightful comments but all i can say is that i thoroughly enjoyed this here(everything from the unconventional pairing to the confusing inception-like vibes lay kept getting). Also, like, unless you kept saying it I'd have no clue that English wasn't your first language. You write better than I'll ever hope to write haha i can only image what magnificent things you can produce in your mother tongue XD
Deansbabymomma #5
Chapter 1: Please tell me there is a part two. But holy its late where I'm at and I c ant type much I just wanted to say that this was an outstanding fanfiction to read. I LOVE being confused while reading a story, it makes me want to continue reading to find the answer. And I'll be honest when I find the answer I usually loose interest. BUT GOD THIS STORY WAS ON A WHOLE OTHER LEVEL. got myself thinkin "Is this the real me" like . Damn. DAMN MAN I WANT TO SAY MORE BUT I AM NOT EDUCATED ENOUGH IN ENGLISH LITERATURE SO I HOPE THIS WAS NICE.
Rikasan #6
I think my mind was just blown. This is such an interesting concept!
Back to Top ↑