Reminiscent

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College AU. Introverted, inexperienced and ambitious music prodigy, Jiyong. Loud! Exciting! Bingu! Seunghyun!

 

 

Foreword

 

  1. ‘Want a mint?’ Seunghyun hands him a box of mints with that enigmatic half-smile playing upon his lips. 'Haven't see you before, but I think I just like you already,’ he says. Jiyong doesn’t think he’s seen a stranger more careless with his words and almost drops his cuppa trying to reason with himself that it was a friendly first move. (With no vestiges of flirtation - no, none at all.)
  2. Seunghyun’s tall and he’s a little clumsy; bumps into walls and apologises to them, he talks too much, has legs that are too long, but. But, he has got this smile, see.
  3. Nights where they lie back on reclining arm chairs, the shards and fragments of Jiyong’s life Seunghyun starts to piece together. “Tu seras toujours dans mon cœur (You will always be in my heart),” Seunghyun murmurs one night. It's the last thing Jiyong hears before he passes out. And gradually they become a recurrence; those words that roll off Seunghyun’s tongue almost like a signature catch phrase. Jiyong doesn’t know what it means, doesn’t ask. But he hears it in his dreams anyway. Supposes its the reason behind his subconscious smiles during the day.
  4. Downpour. Us and ours becomes no longer a term synonymous in the language that they speak. Jiyong's cheeks are wet; he doesn't want to be sober anymore.
  5. The mints still rest at the back of Jiyong’s mind. A trigger of memories, the floodgate of lost feelings. He thinks he hears the familiar gnawing phrase “Tu seras toujours dans mon cœur ” at the back of his mind, before he falls asleep. He still doesn't know what it means. But he also finally registers. Registers that they now become literally an alien language, spoken by a foreign tongue that he can no longer rightly discern. But even still, he thinks. And thinks. And thinks, tosses and turns. Doesn't stop thinking and rethinking...

 

Trigger warning: Not really for those with a weak heart. 

 

 

 

 

 

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bluedandelions #1
Chapter 3: Oh my heart! It hurts so beautifully, I can see Jiyong being reticent with his feelings, shying away from revealing too much. So much beauty in this angsty GTop. Love how Jiyong's thoughts are filled into the story with some many nuances. . Just love it!!
bootyful #2
this is absolute perfection. your writing is beautiful. i'm completely blown by this. you've very cleverly woven in jiyong's thoughts and feelings throughout this story. thank you for sharing this, really. im so in love with every part of it, right up to the end.
frozen-autumn #3
I just want to say that this story was really really good... I don't have all the words to put this comment out, but I think it really did encompass the feelings of GTOP, and yeah, even with the rather.. sad ending, it really felt like it was right. With the lyrics and all... So thanks sooo much for writing! ^^
irrelevance
#4
Chapter 3: Very well written. I love the plot and the ending, it was really painful but so rightly so. I love hate this story so much, you have no idea!!! But still, glad that you've written this. Truly one of the best GTOP fanfiction by far!

If only I could upvote this more than once lol
primrosepath #5
Chapter 3: This was a heartbreakingly beautiful read. It hurts so bad... but I really enjoyed your characterization...it makes me feel all the things i haven't felt in awhile. I hardly ever come across break-up fics like yours?? God this is so sad!! i think you should post the chapter covering the reading. Oh and upvoted, by the way. Thanks for writing such a masterpiece, author-nim.
didoe84
#6
Chapter 3: Oh god I really want to know more about your mind as author behind the choice toy made for this story. .. the end is so bitter (has it any link to the tomato soup or mint ?? ) the regrets are tainting the mood and touching the heart I love it as I hate it (and that's a compliment)
HeavyRxyne
#7
Chapter 3: This story is one of the best Gtop stories by far.

The characters develop alot during the whole thing and I feel like even at the ending Jiyong is still doing jt half heartedly as always.

I know the symbols all connect nut I would like to know how as I am eager and trust me. It wouldn't even stop me from feeling all the emtions I felt.

This si sol good, I can't wait for you to write a longer gtop story like this because it will be brilliant :D
lovedusts
#8
Chapter 3: wow. just wow. that ending really killed me. exactly how well can you write???? wow. i'm speechless and trying so hard not to cry right now..... and i never knew the 'halfs' were so symbollic. whoa this is a really really deep story. i loved every single part of it. thank you so much for posting this. i think you should explain the ending to us ...cuz i can't help but to feel sad for gd :(
Queen-Jiyonce
#9
Chapter 3: I would love to leave a proper comment,but there are literal tears clouding my eyes and I can't even think straight. Thank you for stabbing me in the chest with feelings.
ibgtop
#10
Chapter 2: update soon urgh i hate being left hanging ;;