This is actually my first time reading an Apink fic and must I say that I'm not disappointed with my first reading from the fandom because your story is worth it. Your description is simple yet enough and just right for the story. Neither too long nor too short but give a decent glimpse of the plot. Also, your sentences structures overall are okay though you might need to expand your vocabulary but otherwise, very fine. I didn't find any misspellings too :)

I really like the story as it is very relatable. For me at least, I don't know everyone else. Friendship laced with deeper love is somehow underrated despite of its trueness. Namjoo is a very strong person who remains loyal regardless of what happens & for that I adore her and you too for making the character. I like how she expresses her love through the unsung lyrics (bless Apink for having relatable songs) and how she endured the pain.

Eunji abandoning Namjoo because of inner battles with her own feelings towards Namjoo isn't something that I'm fond of but her character is. Deep down, she pities Namjoo and did she helped the latter when Namjoo was being bullied. It was a very smart move since it led her to the lyrics Namjoo wrote & opened up the door of peace between both of them. Eunji was coward for running from her feelings all these years but she was very brave when she apologized to Namjoo and the latter also being impressive (to me) for forgiving her. The scene of them finally facing each other in the room where Eunji sang Namjoo's song struck me with a swirl of feelings indeed.

I was feeling all flowery inside afterwards. Eunji introduced Namjoo to her secret group of friends. The friends that she didn't tell everyone about. That already shows how much her trust towards Namjoo never faded. They spent much time together to recover those times that have passed, although it must be not equally enough but what matters is that they're happy because they love each other and even confessed. Then, the plot twist happens.

I swear sis, all the hair on my neck stood from when Eunji woke up until the story ends. I really really didn't see it coming oh my God. I'm like idk how to describe what I felt while reading the truth like if Namjoo moved to another country or so, it would still be fine but she's no longer living. No longer alive in the world. And I'm not Eunji but I feel a pang of sadness in my heart. They didn't mean to be and it was fated that way regardless of how one opposes.

Frankly speaking, I like the ending. It's the kind of ending that I like. Fanfics with endings like this might give off the vibe "oh god. They're not together at the end" but to me it is very impactful because it doesn't end with the expected happy ending. I have all the sad endings fics carved in my mind and now yours is one of it to too.

Whereas for Namjoo & Eunji here. I hope they'll ultimately be together in another life or another world just like in Eunji's dream where lovers can be together with no boundaries :)

Chapter 1: WOW OMG author-nim I never thought that a nice story would have such a very sad ending... (T_T)

nicEEE

Chapter 1: SHINeeMe08 adverted me this story and told me to read it, and Oh wow, this is so so sad.
If only they would have spoken one more time.
ugh, my poor heart is hurting what have you done author-nim! *sobs sobs*
thank you for sharing this beautiful agony making story with us ♥

Chapter 1: Woah...this is so sad...i thought u just change some parts and grammar errors but u changed the ending too...but its okay,i still like it evventhough its so sad:'(

Chapter 1: Nice story but sad..

Chapter 1: This story is so cute. ^_^

Chapter 1: :oooo I can't belive it. That was so great, that I wish a continue for this TT__TT I really like EunJoo, they are so cute!
Nice one shot ;) see ya

nice story