Chapter 1: Okay, truth be told I came back here again to properly read this after u posted the spin-off.
Andddddd danggggg this feels like my 2nd time reading this, or maybe it is my 2nd times since that the 1st time I read it on ao3, but... I still dont get it... Since that it has been mentioned, Jongin had some kind of illness, then does that mean, all those time that he saved kyungsoo with a snap of a finger and having Kai in him as his other self, was all a lie. Just his imagination? And jongsoo, he's the kid that jongin once disagree about having right? ..... God I'm so confused! But the fic is good! SO GOOD THAT IT SHOULD BE RECOGNISED MORE!!!
Chapter 1: What inspired you to write this? I’m really interested! I did some research on pseudologia fantastical and came across a research article discussing a case where a man (an Asian man too) lost his fiancée in a car accident. When I read it it sounded similar to your story! This is such a rare disease so someone writing about it is incredible! Doing such research into these parhological disorders is really amazing! And it creates beautiful stories!
Chapter 1: This is some serious brain bomb omggg. I wanna cry too!!! I’m so distraughtttt! I love this idea though and you wrote it so well. I loved how it was all strange at first but then everything’s tied together in the end! BRAVO! Thank you for writing such an extraordinary fic! Salamat po~
Chapter 1: Oh my gosh all the time lapse got me all fcuked up but then you spilled the beans OF THE ACTUAL TRAGIC WHAT THE HELL V THIS IS SO HEART-BREAKING I CANNOT And oh my god YOU ARE CLEARLY REALLY GOOD WITH WORDS V!!!! I ADMIRE!!! The words you use are really simple and easy to comprehend, yet all the sentences are so well-linked together!! Kim Jongin's shattered memories are just so painful to watch and even more painful to feel oh my god...
And Kim Jongsoo's identity revelation is just... I'M A SOBBING MESS RIGHT NOW V IT'S YOUR FAULT!!! I CANNOT /UGLY WHALE SOBBING
;;;;; Jongin was way more happy when he was with Kyungsoo, even if it was only in his fantasy. I don't know why the time was up, maybe it's because jongin was starting to realize that everything only happened in his head? He tried to forget but he couldn't, thus the shattered 'reality?' *cries a million years*
Anyway, you wrote really well (and your English is perfect, better than mine). The first pov was refreshing. You should write more! I'll be cheering for you!
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