You're My Happiness
Description
"Since you're so brave, we dare you to go and kiss him on the lips,"
"W-what?"
~
Everyone was afraid of his cold glare,
But she wasn't,
No one ever dare to approach him,
But she did,
Everyone was scared to even talk to him,
But she wasn't,
No one could make him smile,
But she did it
Without her realising.
~
Kai, the famous creep in their school. He never smile, he never laugh, and he never respond to any questions and jokes. Concludes the reason why the whole students called him The Statue.
Then come Na Mi, the cheerful girl who would do anything to see him smile.
Foreword
《 SNEAK PEEK 》
"Okay the first thing you should practice is this, I will teach you."
Na Mi leaned closer and motioned him to smile by placing her index fingers on both corners of Kai's lips and stretched them upwards. She smiled.
"Smile~"
Unfortunately Kai flicked her forehead.
"Ow! That's hurt!"
CHARACTERS;
Kai [ The Statue ]
Jung Na Mi [The Gorgeous but Dorky girl]
Kyungsoo [ The Cute Prefect]
Sara & Jaemi [ The Two Witty Bestfriends ]
Min Ah [ The Hottest Girl ]
Baekhyun & Chen [ The Class Trollers]
AN ENTRY FOR:
》 Fluff Me Out Writing Contest《
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REVIEWED BY :
● ~Summer Breeze Multi Shop~ Final Score 82/100
"I find it especially cute because Kai never smiled, but Na Mi got him to so she's quite literally his happiness,"
"I think your pace and writing style are very nice. I like how you open with exposition and don't move too fast into the main plot while still introducing main character and keep the story moving," -killergal
● Reading Is Beautiful Final Score 49/100 by g-boy
" It’s a classic highschool romance, but it does have it’s nice tints, which mainly comes from Kai’s character. This at least has a good point you build the story on, so we can say you are off the cliche-hook in here,"
"I did enjoy it because it was lighthearted in general, some drama points of course, but it was enjoyable."-g-boy
Final Score 70/100 by sunshineline
"I like your story. I think it’s sweet. You’ve employed cliché’s and tropes and made a solid story out of them,"
" What I like about Kai is that he’s consistent. He changes at a believable rate. I think you wrote the small moments of him initially warming up to Na Mi really well, because the fact that he keeps his emotions in careful check is always present. He’s always changing, but slowly, which is really impressive"
"I love Na Mi. I think her motivations are clear from the start and that she makes a lot of sense as a person. I can’t stress how much I love Na Mi enough. She’s my favourite OC character in fanfic,"-sunshineline
DISCLAIMER:
DO NOT PLAGIARIZE OR STEAL IN ANY WAY. THIS STORY IS PURELY MY OWN IDEA AND IF YOU SEE ANY SIMILARITIES WITH OTHER STORIES, IT IS PURELY COINCIDENTAL.
COMMENTS, SUBCRIPTIONS AND UPVOTES ARE HIGHLY APPRECIATED.
HAVE FUN READING AND ENJOY!
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