Chapter 17: shjdjdn i didn't Even see the last two updates wtf
i had to reread the whole thing because it's been so long and i'm like a whole new person now... and i just have so many thoughts and comments ???? like rem and julia ed me up a little (read: a lot) and i got really emotional and then she heard julia in the woods and i was jsut djdjdj?1!1!!2! i don't KNOW how to express what i'm feeling god . and also poor sweet kimberly, im in so much pain 4 her
also i love jenny and damian being put together it's amazing and every time they like, joked with each other it was nice... but the polaroid scene!? two gay chapters in a row? amazing. i love it and i'm here for it
okay i'm done i dont wanna overshare but i'm still so in love with this idea and story and thank you for continuing it, take your time and stay safe n healthy guys! i'll try to check in more often

Chapter 17: AHHHH I FINALLY GOT TO THIS OKAY OKAY

- the first paragraph got me ed up like damn u really did do that psychology on me now i dont even know if im real or fake rn
- idk why but i like that part where the clip is playing on the screen and jenny tells him to turn it off, calmly i imagine, at first but he doesnt notice it until she shouts at him aggressively its like im watching a law n order svu episode
- the cliche thing about the line being cut lol peep the lowkey 4th wall broken thing
- "what, like home alone?" "exactly" fkfjdjdjsjas i love damian
- aiden and the polaroid ......... sobs
- kimmy and her camera ....... spooky
- when jenny sarcastically suggested ramming the door down and damian actually did it i spit out my water
- WHY WOULD YOU LEAVE HER ALONE goddammit damian

honestly i loved this chapter so much i love this dynamic i love these characters and i cant wait to see what else u guys have in store !! ok bye work hard eat right drink water love y'all

Chapter 17: damien : lemme @ these creeps with my Strong Hands
jennifer : or .. Nail Bat

Chapter 17: hohohohoho boi
so, like always, im so in love with your writing. your pacing is always so perfect and all of the events flow so nicely. i really like the dynamics of jennifer and damien. they're a good match up in that they both bring different things to the situation and allow for a combination of strengths. i think this chapter was especially entertaining and i really like where bonezone is going :)
now for my random thoughts
my ing toes curled when the nail went in and i cannot forgive you for the disgust and mental strain you put me through.
also
damien and jen : we will not split up !!
damien and a now injured jen : welp, guess it can't be helped let's split up
Kimberly on the projector ?? or past offense ??
aiden up in the cold attic by himself like an emo loser .. wow .. i aspire to reach that level (also he kept that polaroid ? cute ,, but also they found it randomly when everything is falling apart so .. not so cute ..)
the rusty door opened and if any of those rust flakes went into jen's foot. . Hello Tetanus
what's in the hallway of that rusty door tho ?? sup with that
creepy shopping lists wtf !! "hey honey don't forget to buy that mannequin at the store today !!"

i love chap 5 and i love u i cannot wait for more of this juicy plot to unfold :)

Chapter 17: dundundundun

ok so i already read this but im on my phone rn and its being super slow so im gonna read the whol fic again and leave a big comment for u in the replies later ok

winter's end ? more like the end of me

Chapter 16: okay...not to sound like a little B*tch but this chapter lowkey made me cry and feel things. why are u playing with my heart, chen and alice........
I'm Sad, You're Sad, We're ALL Sad. usually i would support Gay but in this chapter the gays are making my heart break, Honestly, truly.. .
julia understands rem so well :(((( i can tell that rem feels the safest around her, jules was truly an angel, a goddess, an out of this world being for rem. shes too good for this world aHHHHH. its so sad that rem cant be with the love of her life anymore but she'll keep her in her thoughts ALWAYS.
since i created rem, , im feeling even more grief and pain. thank u for understanding her character and delivering her emotions well in this chapter honestly i love y'all so much :"^D just when she thought julia would do the gay with her y'all hit her with that "HA its just a dream u hoE..!" . the start of the chapter made me feel SO SOFT and then it escalated to me just feeling Terrible and hating everyhting
and of course rem would run outside without thinking twice, that lovesick old hag. she'd do anything for jules but too bad she didnt do it On Time. i want them to be reunited but jules is a wendigo now?? GOD i hate everyone
anyways...FINALLY someone knows wtf timothy was on about, she gotta hurry and tell her friends about those wendigos before they end up being a five-course meal for those creatures Haha...
honestly parker is the last person i expected to run out and chase after rem but well he did and i am: Shook. this duo gotta survive and rescue their friends go go!! :D
looking forward to their teamwork and whats gonna happen next, take ur time to write i appreciate ur hardwork u w u
p.s im rem x julia's #1 shipper hence my long rant for this couple. i still feel like i havent expressed enough appreciation towards them but i'll save that for next time bc this chapter is truly a blessing on its own already, rem and julia are the cutest!!

Chapter 15: timothy is such a precious kid and im mad no one ever listens to him like...! he may be addicted to paranormal stuffs but hes a nice child he wouldnt lie to his friends >:(
and i knew there was smth off with nathan!!! that dude sketchy af but hes oKaY i guess since he acts like the dad sometimes especially in this chapter when he comforted timothy who almost cried (or cried?? pls protect him)
i love the way their characters r portrayed it feels so real and relatable in a Sense. and their chemistry too, eventho theyre kinda awkward but they help each other out. it is A Good Concept, yes
quoting nigahiga, if the place ur staying at always has bad weather and things that shouldnt be there, ARE there (in this chapter, the mannequin on the bridge) then u should probably Get The Fucc Out. :D

Chapter 14: so now we find out that even the most cocky person On Earth gets scared when he gets abducted wow thats nice information . will sam finally open up to domi?? stay tuned for the next episode of Mr. Tsundere And I....
the way u wrote this made me feel the fear the characters were feeling i actually got shivers, i felt like i was the one getting dragged through the woods ^___^ teach me ur ways...!
jdkjfkdj if i was in damian's spot i woulda bash the fuC k outta jenny without thinking twice, given the situation . im sorry
AND that bloody writing, Good God......... woulda sh*t my pants already, im not lying. it means the possibly psychotic killer could enter and exit their cabin easily n could be hiding inside with them at that moment...hide and seek has never been this intense, truly. hopefully they both survive to bc wtf!!! they dont deserve to die thats All.