Beyond the Shadow

Description

It started with a meeting between an introverted boy named Yongguk and a bunny teeth boy named Himchan.

They did not have a pleasant first impression on each other and Yongguk ended up making Himchan cry. But then his twin brother, Yongnam brought the boy back to their house and reintroduced them to each other. Despite having problems on hating Himchan's front teeth that reminded him of his dead pet bunnies, Yongguk let Himchan join him and his brother on their journey towards adulthood.

 

Foreword

 

I accidentally came up with this fic after looking at Yongguk's recent insta post. I do realize that I have been meaning to write about the Bang twins so yeah, here it is. And also it was supposed to be a oneshot but because of my frantic non-stop typing fingers, I ended up writing longer than I intended to. Maybe this will turn into a two-shot or maybe not. Maybe multichaptered. I have no idea. OTZ Do anticipate tho~ n__n

And also keep in mind that all of the contents in the story are entirely fiction although some information may relate with the characters' real life.

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Dustpaw #1
Chapter 4: I am now going to cry. TT This is a lovely story.
secretlurve #2
Chapter 4: A good story we have here. Everything is just in place. The plot isn't that heavy, but it not that light to keep readers out of interest either. It gives this nice smooth feeling when I read it. It doesn't bore me although the conflict is not complex, and need to be mention that it also not directly inflicted on Yongguk. Like he said, he was the shadow. Wherever Yongnam go, he will be there. So whenever Yongnam has a trouble, he is there to feel it too, although he has nothing to do with it.

His role is one special thing too. He is the one who solve, not the one to bring in trouble. He's the rational one instead of a character who has flaw they have to fix as character development. Not to say he doesn't have one-although I can't pinpoint out one right now- but, you know. He is the side character who is a main. Just like you wrote in the story.

Your writing is just, and this is well done. I just love this. :D
seizetheday1001 #3
Chapter 4: One of the few stories that manages to break my heart! Lovely writing!
kimmiekimmie97 #4
Chapter 4: Yongguk such a nice guy, I love this story I cried every chapter . sobs
zanfii #5
Chapter 4: Sobs. No. How did this happen ... poor gukkie
Gwibooni #6
Chapter 4: ..........Q-Q...........
cheatereater #7
Chapter 4: oh god, this was so sad... Yongguk's such a nice guy ;A; I loved it, thank you!
chuppoppo #8
Chapter 4: i am legit crying. arghhhhhhh this is a nice story authornim!!! *throws confetti while crying* T^T
MollsLeMouse #9
Chapter 4: Oh my god, this hurts a lot. Every single chapter was a lot of pain in the heart, I was hoping Yongguk's confession at some point of the story. Thank you so much for the amazing work.
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