Beneath The Surface

Description

Jongin fell in love with the shallows of the beach a long time ago, his passion never spreading past the shores of dry sand and foaming waves. But an unlikely encounter with enigmatic Taemin sparks his yearning for adventure and a desire to learn more about what's hidden beneath the surface  and only then does he realise how hard it is to make the ocean love him back.

Foreword

pairing/s: kaisoo
rating: (PG)13+ because of gayness
words: ~45.5k

warnings: badly written fantasy, friendship!taekai, random taeminxsuho ship because i'm a grown woman and i do what i want
notes: special thanks to my bff si mei for making the poster!! ily swagmei xx

yeeew B) so here's another fic and THIS TIME IT'S NOT ABOUT EATING DISORDERS OR DEPRESSION OR DYING (maybe a bit of dying who knows) but i've definitely stepped out of my comfort zone with this! i don't usually write fantasy and stuff but i hope this is decent all the same, pls don't forget to drop me some comments because they make me a slappy snappy happy chappy and i love them more than anything!!!!!

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luci1995 #1
Chapter 17: I went into this thinking that it would end with a taekai pairing but I love this so much more! I've never thought that a taeminxsuho pairing would be so adorable but I was so wrong!

This story is seriously great! I wasn't sure what to expect when I started it but it surprised me in the best way possible! I love it so much!
milkyboy_khun
#2
Chapter 17: Wow. Just ... Wow.
This is amazing and so damn good and I love you so much too authornim unnie!!!!!!
Waahh Taeminnie got Junmyeon now!! Yayyyyyyyyyy I was hoping ... Tae is somehow my favor character in this book (and ohmygod he is SOO CUTE when he's embarrassed and excited! Keke ;)) and you had me panicking when you said that Kyunggie was dead. I was like, NOOOOOOOOOO then our Taeminnie came along and helped, with Minho and Jonghyun. (btw, why is there no Key? You've got Jinki *Onew* and 2min and Jjong, but no Key? *pouts*)
this is so well written, I love your fantasy even more than your "dark, depressing fanfic" so ... If it isn't too much on your plate, please can you write another one?
And even tho there is no reason for a sequel ... Maybe? Sequel? Please? Like, with Tae and Junmyeon at the palace and kaisoo and stuff?
Anyways gotta go, luv your fic you r amazing unnie
^_^
mbk
milkyboy_khun
#3
Chapter 2: Yep. I knew it. Well done!! Kaisoo? When is Kyunggie gonna come?
Mbk
milkyboy_khun
#4
Chapter 1: First chappie luv it and I'm guessing Taeminnie is a mermaid? Or merman, I guess. Keke.
;)
mbk
Chrisalys238
#5
Chapter 17: Oh. My. Gosh. I cried, I really did I loved Jinki. And Taemin and Joonmyeon were absolutely ADORABLE. Thank you for writing this, I'm glad I stuck with it.
TruArmy1 #6
Chapter 17: congrats for finishing!!! this was honestly so good >< i don't really read fantasy but i loved this so much
goojayhee #7
Chapter 17: I know it's late but I was super busy and sick at the same time.
Honestly speaking I'm left speechless, I have no words to say. Perfect fic.
Happy ending... My feelings all over the place!
Your writing style is one of a kind, you made the story had a special element which is straightforward yet this straightforward thing made the story perfect!
This story made so happy am gonna miss it! ㅠ.ㅠ
I really hope you're planning on writing another story 'cause surly I'm going to miss your writing. Are you planning on writing a new one?! Pleeeeeeeeeeease say yes, pretty please.
Thank you for this amazing peace of art hon. Ilysm<3
[deactivated] #8
Chapter 17: I love you so much. I feel like a newborn baby after reading this :D
infinitaehyung
#9
Chapter 17: MOTHERFUCIAEGN HELL YEEEAAAAAH KYUNGSOO AND JUNMYEON MEETING
HAPPY ENDINDG IWEKHJGEAH NYEHEHEHEHEHEHE i am sO HAPPY rn you dont even know man
like wow this whole fic has been a rollercoaster ride of emotions and FEEeeeEEeeEELs ~( ̄▽ ̄~) ~( ̄▽ ̄)~ (~ ̄▽ ̄)~ youre hands down one of my fav authors ever ok and i'm not being biased
NYEHEHEHEHE happy shawn is happy
kinda sad this fic is over now tho ;_; wHAT DO I LOOK FORWARD TO NOW
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE AND FOR MAKING MY HEART WHOLE AGAIN <3
Iheartyou1004 #10
Love this fic :)