Bubble tea hardships

Description

Luhan's life was pretty boring. His life consisted of studying, studying and studying. But that completely changed when he met someone who made his life like a living hell.

That person is:

Oh Sehun. 

Foreword

Before you read this fanfic, I have to warn you. English is not my first language so if you find any grammatical mistakes or typos, please say it. I want to perfection my english as much as possible. 

I hope you all will enjoy this fanfic. Have fun while reading!

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lorcaclea #1
Chapter 10: I feel like its the end of the world. Please update this soon. I can't wait.
flowereu #2
Chapter 10: WOAAAAH! THIS IS PERFECT! I JUST READ THIS TODAY AND I CAN'T STOP. AND YOU JUST UPDATED AUTHOR-NIM! UAA KEEP UP WITH THIS STORY! FIGHTING~
jikookminkook #3
Chapter 9: Wow~ It has improved! Daebak...
Anyway, I really like this story line. Like, a lot. I like how you made Hunhan try to shake off their feelings when it's 293792% obvious XD.
You left me hanging at the end. Update soon~
jikookminkook #4
Chapter 1: "Luhan woke up to the sound of his alarm telling him that it was way past his normal wake up time." (sayin should be telling)
"After drying himself, he" (instead of and) "dressed and ate some breakfast."
'Buzy' should be 'busy'.
Luhan had exactly ten minutes until the bell would ring ('ring' replacing 'ran').
Instead of "He was never be able to pay him back," use "He would never be able to pay him back." (Notice that I used 'would' instead of 'was'.)
Also, use "I am not going to be your ing maid." Instead of "I am not be your ing maid." (Add 'going to' between 'not' and 'be')
One last thing for now. "Pay me back than." should be "Pay me back then." (Then instead of than. Than is mainly used to compare size or quantity. For example, "The lion was bigger THAN the mouse."
I like this chapter, save for a few errors since English is not your first language.
lorcaclea #5
Chapter 9: Awful is word full of disgust... Hahahaha I supposed its for Hunhun baby.
lorcaclea #6
Chapter 7: More updates please.
crackoppa #7
wow >w< good story!
ohelss #8
Chapter 7: i have a feeling luhan is the kid that left in kindergarten
SophiaYanoLu #9
Chapter 6: NOOOOOOOOOOOO! SEHUNNIE DONT!
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