Chapter 1: Omg... what do I say now ... !?!?!

Chapter 1: Well damn....that escalated quickly but nonetheless it was a great short ^-^

Chapter 1: Oh my.. Poor kyungsoo.. :(

Chapter 1: Short but strong. That's what this fic was. Impressively written young writer. Loved it

Chapter 1: Hahaha dang... I read it again to see if maybe I was being too sensitive. .. but it just made me more mad

I didn't want jongin to touch kyungsoo at the end... to me he didn't deserve it. You just called him a chater. You didn't believe him, he died knowing you didn't believe him. Because you didn't believe made that sentence more certain. .. which is why kyungsoo was probably telling him... you have to believe me. ... not more you let your own pride get in the eay and now he is dead.

To me jongin doesn't deserve to cuddle to kyungsoo dead body.

Oooo I need to stop... I'll go now. Bye bye

... I guess it didn't hit me as it should of. Maybe it was too short.

I was more mad then I was sad. Soo died for nothing. His father let him get . What the hell is up with that. Baekhyun and jongin believed soo would do that knowing that it could kill him. I'm sorry but that little tid bit doesn't just leave your head like that. So I'm more mad at jongin. And soo's dad.

I'm more mad then anything else.

Chapter 1: Wait, what's about Soo sleep unwillingly with other man and faeries can't lies? Meaning Soo lie at Jongin thats why he dies or he had make Jongin mad at him??

Chapter 1: Omg why are you doing this to me authornim ㅠㅠ