Chapter 2: eeeeeeep i always love reading ballerino!kai in taekai fics and this is beautiful! also Key and Hyoyeon here are great in this with their teasing and knowing looks about taekai uwu
and this bit: “Look at me. Can you see me? Paint me.” “I’m always looking at you. I can see you, perfectly. I will.”
“Come paint me.” “I will.”, it's just so beautiful and i smiled a lot reading that part because you can see how strong taemin and jongin are connected to each other ;v;
i also loved how you left the ending hanging (?) like that, like we know that they'll be together eventually but it's left open on how you want to picture it. i love that kind of ending when i read fics ;v;
fjskahdhf i'm not good in expressing myself in English but i just wanted you to know that i loved every bit of this piece!!

i hope you write more taekai in the future <3

(oh and i was that one commenting on taekai fic, thank you for recommending me this!)

Chapter 2: It's 4:30 am even I'm reading this (because my body ing hates me and I have insomnia), and I almost screamed. This is so perfect, you're perfect, I love the way you write. I'm an artist myself, and I've secretly always dreamed that Taemin was an artist too. Thank you so much for writting this, you made me so happy

Chapter 2: this was amazing. i dont know what else to say, im speechless

Chapter 2: No, but this deserves more than a "nice". o_o' This is absolutely beautiful, Taemins part is just as beautiful as Jongins. I love it. Thank you for writing this in the first place. Wauw.

Chapter 2: "Nice"










Hahaha, just kidding xD
This was beyond amazing, beautifully written!
I can't with shy Taemin. Lucky Kim Jongin, I wish I have a cute stalker like Tae ♡
Great job Peque!

Chapter 2: This is so beautifully written. I'm being greedy and hoping for a sequel ? Like, r they gonna date? R they gonna be friends? Thank u for this story

Chapter 2: This was a beautiful fic! You made sure to describe how significant dance/art was to both characters and incorporate it into their emotions and obsession with each other. Your writing is perfect. I loved reading it and I really appreciate that you chose to write both their POVs instead of a sequel because they are both such different characters which made their first meeting in the end (the one that counts as a meeting lol) so sweet. You are of course welcome to bless us with a sequel, lol! If not, def one of those stories I'll always go back to reread to feel happy.

Chapter 2: Apparently you've gained some fans from this fic. xD I told you this was beautiful just like the first one. ^^ Do you believe me now? This whole thing really is great and I loved your characterizations and everything. Your descriptions really fit with everything and make it super easy to imagine. Now, I'm saying this as a fan, I really enjoyed the story and the journey along the way. Anyways, you're awesome and so is this!

Chapter 2: oh this was just as great as the first one don't worry! I loved how you retold it from Taemin's point of view. I used to draw (not paint, just draw) and I could relate to a lot of things said here. I liked how you mentioned lines have their own mind and even if you are the artist, they draw themselves. which made me wonder, are you an artist yourself? I could see how well you could tell things from an artist's point of view so I thought maybe you are one as well.

Taemin is so cute (like always *u*) the messy, passionate artist persona suits him so well! his relationship with both Key and Jonghyun is awesome. I loved how you included Jonghyun's compositions, makes everything fit the characters very well. sometimes, when reading AUs, I have a hard time imagining the characters doing whatever jobs the writer gave them but in this one, it all suited so well for everybody.

all in all, I really loved this two-shot. and I would love it if you wrote more Taekai in the future! n.n