You're So Beautiful You Made Me Forget My Pick Up Line

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This story is now discontinued. For further elaboration, please read Chapter 5, -Note-.

 

Jongin attempts to woo Sehun.

Foreword

"Hey Sehun are you a drill sergeant? 'Cause you have my privates standing in attention."

 

 

 

A/N: the internet shows you funny things.

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Argon_Sora #1
Hi, I told you to be prepared, not going to make you cry or anything, imma just find some of your fics that are super popular and motivate you from here xD

You are a great writer, btw love that title, I'm going to use it on you soon....oh wait I dont think I need to, since I nvr need to use any pick up lines on someone that's already mine ;D
Sorry had to be chesesy


Anyways, feed your subscribers some love and update your fics lmao. I can help proof read it if it can speed up the process, after 21 days are over ok lol


Love ya
I know you are sleeping
It's 12am
Maybe you'll see this in the morning?

HI Senpai :D
Senpai notice my love for you ;3
Oh wait, you already did :D
Kai_maaya #2
Chapter 5: Please update !!
monikalusy #3
Chapter 5: Please update ;(
Pomegrenatepuppy #4
Chapter 5: Are you planning to update this fan fiction? I mean obviously you can do what you want but it'd be nice to know so I don't get my hopes up for this...
teufelchen_netty #5
Chapter 5: Gosh. Jongin is so dumb. Competition, really?
Stupid idiot xd
08September21 #6
Chapter 5: Omona waaah
CuTAEpie #7
Chapter 5: Why do i feel that Jongin's gonna lose? hahaha
SuperFluffyCat #8
Chapter 5: Dun dun dunnnnnnnn!!
PICK UP LINE BATTLE!!
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