The Simple Facts Completed!

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Tinywings  on says about chapter 1:
I have a tendency of stalking around to see what my aff friends write, and I never got the chance to read yours. Quite honestly, might as well be because I can't really read stories with pairings I don't particularly like and then it's hard to really enjoy a story (especially when it's not well written) but I wanted to believe that, if anyone, you would be the one to prove me wrong. And you did.

I tend to point out things that I noticed but really might not be relevant or anything, so I apologize in advance for anything I say. Lovely storyline you got here. It is simple, nothing too fancy that would ask too much of the brain, and, in my eyes, placed in a somewhat cliche context. It is saddening to read how Yoona continues pulling at Changmin's heart, hoping for that one miracle day, never losing the hope. I wonder how beautiful such love must have see possessed. Six years, after all, is a frightening long time. Still, situations like these exist, and they always break the heart, and you portrayed that well. Only thing is that sometimes when you only used dialogues, I had absolutely no clue who was saying what until the last sentences when they said their goodbyes. Maybe a little bit something could have been added just to make it more clear and more smooth to follow, or maybe I'm just to stupid for it and you should just ignore me. Last thing... I think Yoona lacked something. Before you shoot me for that comment lol, I want to explain it. I think she lacked the love filled emotions that should be dripping off her every single word by now. The only moment it really showed was when Changmin asked Victoria out, but other than that... She had always been... So almost doll-like, emotionless happy almost. At least, for me she was. Six years... That kills the smiles and soft, gentle voice, I believe.

But really, this is altogether really a brilliant piece, and I'm quite content with this being the first changyoon story I ever read. I adore your writing style, really :)

eyes2blues  on says about chapter 1:
i can't say I enjoyed it, coz this is a painful story... But I loved it! This is my first Changmin and YoonA fic and omg.. Way to go to start following your other stories. HAHA! I love the detail and the flow of story in its entirety. Genius! Thanks for sharing this fic with all of us!

screaminpka  on says about chapter 1:
sad but beautiful piece indeed ; A ;
thank you :)

AyraLovesKibum  on says:
The most painful thing in this world is to love someone who used to love you.

Beautiful. A masterpiece! :)

Sucheon  on says:
I cried on the end. So sad ... I even started to like Yoona cause of this story :)

ShermaineShootsYou  on says:
God.... what is this?! T^T it thought the ending would be a happy one... in the end.. but some sad stories like this are really really AWESOME.... :D

SUJUGEN4  on says:
Wow! This is really good but tragic at the same time, poor changyoon </3

Narcissist  on says:
Oh my gosh, my heart just sank! How could you, Changmin! ):
Amazing!

dyahfel  on says:
this is beautiful.

aiyumestranger  on says:
Is it okay to say that I'm rolling around on the floor right now with frustration?>_<
haha, seriously! This is written so perfectly and yet it broke my heart:( Man, I didn't know Changmin could be so slow,ahah.Thanks for this!

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