Almost (Is Never Enough)

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Because whatever 'what ifs' or 'almosts' that they have now will never be enough for her, not when he's leaving. 

Foreword

So I was listening to my music player while I was washing the dishes when Almost Is Never Enough started playing, and then all of a sudden this was created.

If there's a scale for stories out there ranging from Trash to Gold, I'm pretty sure this will fall in the 'Trash' section but I quite like it? And I hope you like it too~ Hehe!

Anyway, enjoy!^^

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Natocuty #1
Chapter 1: I liked it, although you have some mistakes here and there but they can always be corrected.
The ending is rather bittersweet; liking someone but not confessing for fear of ruining the friendship you both share is a common thing that people struggle with but here not only was she afraid of ruining what they have by confessing but the object of her affections was leaving, he was leaving her, so even if she did confess and even if he did accept her feelings they would barely have any time to spend together as a real couple.
I wonder if she realized her feelings for him sooner would she have had the courage to confess? (I doubt it though)
It would be nice if you could develop this idea even more by writing a chaptered story perhaps, to see what awaits these two in the future...that is if you want to of course! :)
Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed this one-shot.
Keep up the good work,
Fighting!
ParkMiyoung #2
Chapter 1: It's not angst, but it's kinda bittersweet at the end...I do like it though, but you should stick to one POV. Like, in the beginning it was a "you" POV and I really like those POV's, but then it changed for the rest of the oneshot into third POV...which I liked less, but wouldn't have minded as much if the whole story was in that POV
idontevenknowwhy #3
Chapter 1: Really nice and cute!
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