Overdose

Description

Life was never meant to go like this...he wasn't supposed to be in this much pain...the medication was supposed to help...but why didn't it? 

Foreword

Third in the Death AU that I'm currently doing and as much as I don't want to admit this, it's Tao this time and I'm sooooo sorry in advance. I really really am. 

So in case you haven't figured, you'll need to read:

Heart Attack

Baby, Don't Cry 

to kinda follow where this all goes from though I warn you tissues will be needed because this is extreme angst and very depressing. 

Just be thankful that it's not real. 

Hope you all enjoy at any stretch of the imagination.

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Exobaeby #1
Chapter 7: I rambled so much I didn't answer your question - if you did more, I would be interested to see the remaining 9 die together, like a crash or something (god forbid!) I'm not satan I swear! but since the kriao were based on real-life what-ifs, idk how you would do the others. If they all went together to join kriao it would be super sad but like, yay reunited! & you won't have to write a scene about sm explaining why this group keeps dying one by one & is still around :9 just my idea.

Ps you are really good at describing scenes in a way that's easily visualised.
Exobaeby #2
Chapter 7: What a journey. I found this trilogy when looking for taoris angst and it delivered. I'm a new Exo fan but not new to Kpop so I knew they left but not the details. Once I learned it & how they were called traitors, I thought "does an idol have to die on stage for fans/companies to do better be more understanding?!" since they only left after being sick & mistreated. So in a weird way I'm glad you wrote out how that could happen! Because honestly these scenarios could have happened irl. I love that you had the others be emotional (the bit where Suho begs the picture of Krishan to spare Tao like he knew what would happen moved me), that you kept the ot12 brotherhood going (it's my favourite thing) and gave bittersweet endings. I appreciate you a lot for writing these, author. I love angst anyway so killing off my biases is right up my street hehe
Philosophies
#3
Chapter 7: This story arc is beautiful omigosh.
kennocha #4
Chapter 7: Alright now, why did I just cry??
springjasmine91
#5
Chapter 7: I promised myself not to cry but goodness I don't care anymore. Well done
BookWorm61 #6
Chapter 7: I'm imagining the photo and the visual I have makes my heart warm :3

About continuing the story, I would be curious of how it'd turn out but maybe not all the members? Because if you kill all of them off one by one like how Kris, Luhan and Tao died, that's not okay for their mental health to be completely honest. For example is Sehun in this story. With how devastated he was over Tao's death, imagine how bad it would become if, let say, Kai died. Other than Sehun, Suho might even go crazy because of guilt even if the others say it's not his fault. Not to mention the mental stress we'd get to have all of them die, even if it's in this deathau....

Conclusion: Sure, go ahead but maybe continue until there's only six of them left or until they sue the damn company who was slowly killing them. And I agree with KouAkira, I'm curious about TaoRisHan too! Anyway, another great job, author-nim! :D
KouAkira #7
Chapter 7: Taohun friendship was very nice and cute ;___; And about continue writing the story, it might be good if you have and idea to write it :) though I am more now curious abou how did TaoRisHan feel while they watch everyone celebrate XD
BookWorm61 #8
Chapter 6: Sadly I don't have a pororo plushie but I'd definitely join Sehun in running around and making aeroplane noises. I always enjoy these parts of your series and the later chapters because it gives off a bittersweet feeling when they have to let go of Kris, Luhan and Tao but at least they can still move on without forgetting all their memories together. Can't wait for the next chapters.
Author-nim fighting!
EXO_Trash #9
Chapter 6: Ladies and Gentlemen, don't go through Taohun pics before you read this story, you'll end up a hot mess :'( :'( :'( :'(