Lonely Love Tonight

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Baro loves Sandeul, but there is a big problem between them and eternity.

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Added into my 25 challenge, My Heart

USED PROMPT: She said, "don't get too close. It's dark inside. It's where my demons hide."
And I answered, "get too close, there is a hell inside of me, it's where your demons can live."

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ichbindeinvater #1
Chapter 1: I love this story but it's so sad I'm crying ... still beautiful though :3
anneber #2
Chapter 1: OMG!! The feelz in this story were TOO real!!! I still feel the shock of Sandeul's passing. This was well written, compelling and heartwarming!!! Thank you!!!
very_ship_them #3
Chapter 1: Omg! That's enough cancer for today T.T
Even in school the lesson was about cancer and ugh..
Baby sandeul T.T
cheerminnie #4
Chapter 1: UNIQUE AND BEAUTIFUL.
Amalya #5
Chapter 1: Dammit. I had a comment to post and then it wouldn't so I had to start over. Ugh. Oh well. Here goes!

This was incredibly bittersweet. While the theme isn't exactly new, you did manage to make it your own and I really appreciated how things just didn't fall magically into place immediately. There were some typos throughout but overall, it was well written and easy to believe as real. And in the very beginning, while I didn't know what was going on, I figured something was up when Baro knocked Sandeul over by accident and the other man didn't want really anything to do with him regardless.

The way you brought them closer together little by little was wonderful and watching Sandeul's walls break was both heart rending and warming. *sigh* That scene with them playing in the snow was particularly entertaining and I really liked how Sandeul sort of unbent enough to play back, just a touch.

And then you kicked me in the feels with the next scene and the one after it. -_- I don't regret (hah, see what I did there? hehe) reading this but you definitely pulled at some strings. The ending was beautifully done too. I liked how you didn't drag it out unnecessarily and Baro's response to Sandeul's answer was perfect. Giving a summary of what happened and then that final scene were also good ideas. That last passage I can only describe as haunting, in a good way, and it's an image that will likely stick with me for some time.

Thank you for that my dear and well done.
ernj-dews #6
Chapter 1: T_______________________T
MisheeFrancheska #7
Chapter 1: that was really cruel yah know T.T
but .. but, it`s beautiful thank you!
Lisett #8
Chapter 1: why did i ask for this again??? please remind me.. ;-;
either way, thank you so much for this. your writing is beautiful. <3

now, if you would excuse me, let me go regret life some place else.
MisheeFrancheska #9
oh yass badeul ! updtate soon authornim!
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