broken (and beyond repair)

Description

Yoona thinks that the flawless lies are always the most beautiful and cruel lies – they let her believe even the prettiest of things, and everything that’s perfect and impossible, for that’s all he is made up of. She forces a superficial smile and pretends everything is okay despite crying ugly tears to sleep alone by herself because being in denial has already become her habit of sorts. 

Foreword

Author: Royalblueblood

Characters: Yoona, Sehun 

Genre: Romance, Angst, Slice of Life  

Total Word Count: 1914

Credit: flavahz @ poetic payback 

 

And when night falls, after she has fallen fast asleep, Sehun pulls the glass bottle of volka out and takes the first sip, tentative at first. He wonders why she (or he) is still here. It's still the same emptiness, the same bitter cold, the same deafening silence, and he takes another sip, this time, everything starts to slip away around him, so he lets himself drink a little more than he would.

 

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tripleAAA
#1
Chapter 1: Wow, I am absolutely blown away by this piece. Every single line tugged at my heartstrings and my eyes teared up when I realised what's happening. I just love how you tell the story from both POVs, it's amazing how they eventually link up to the final twist. This will definitely be one of my Sehun & Yoona OTP favorites to read again! Thank you for writing this ♥
morethanlove
#2
Chapter 1: Crying so badly because of the ending!!
roxygal
#3
Chapter 1: Author this is too mind-blowing. The way you write it made the impact of the even more impactful and after reading the whole story, I felt the impact of her death even more. The whole story is basically about Sehun's memories of Yoona and Yoona's memories of Sehun. It is sad that Yoona never told Sehun the truth initially. If she did, the story would have gone a much different way which I would have much preferred. But I am sure angst is your forte which is why you chose this route. Everything links up, I am glad you told us about the Before/After if not I would have missed it. All in all, good job. I enjoyed reading this one shot and hope you'd be coming up with more stories.
hiddencupcakes #4
fluff and comedy would be nice..oh how about yoona dealing with a psycopath or like she's working in a mental h? or historical ff perhaps? (im blabbering lol) really tho as long as it's yoona and anything you write is fine bc it would still come out amazing!
afiqahalya
#5
Chapter 2: Author how abouut do we got married yoona with someone hehhe it must be challenging
Just giving my oppinion
LunaSungJong
#6
Chapter 1: Np: Blossom Tears - Leo (VIXX) ft Lyn
myunstal_ship
#7
Chapter 1: So Yoona is dead??? What happen??
hiddencupcakes #8
Chapter 1: omigod i love the transitions!! props for writing another perfectly-written fic again. your stories never fails to deliver looking forward for your next one ~(*o*~)
Graylu #9
Chapter 1: It's awesome!
limyun
#10
Wow, so glad that you are back and have written something new! Having been your reader for a long time, I must say that your writing style never disappoints. I got abit lost while reading your BEFORE/AFTER but the ending answers my doubts. It's amazing the way you link the parts up!

Thanks for writing another amazing oneshot again. Hope to see more stories from you :)