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mellifluousxx
#1
Chapter 4: this is like my... 8th time?? reading this ?? and i'm still crying because i'm a crybaby like that but also because your writing always does that to me aH i miss you : (
Chrys4u954 #2
Chapter 4: Chapter 4: I've said it before and I'll say it again, I am totally trash for your writing. You built up jongin's universe so well and I could practically see it all playing out before my eyes like I was watching a cute webtoon or some hilariously touching romcom or something. ❤️
EtherealReality
#3
Chapter 4: Okmnhoggixfhxktckhcfhcgucihvgiciyv damn thats a nice life tbh like yeah she ran away but she got a nice job for her interests and has amazing friends and a beautiful partner omg I wish
suhero #4
this was fantastic!
8thhouser
#5
Chapter 4: i literally do not like kailu in the romantic sense bUT THIS WORKS SO WELL I LOVE IT
Stormoverparis
#6
Im not always super fond of gender benders but i really like this one! The way you just built up Jongins universe made me feel like i was there and watching it happen.

But sobs what happens to chantao
PalmerPie
#7
Chapter 2: I was trying to go for a more suave reader approach BUT YOU HAD TOGO AND GIVE ME FEELS
I love sooyoungs totally on point bargaining personality and the xiulay and forever dense chanyeol and cupcakes and can soo just be my chef pls
PalmerPie
#8
Chapter 1: YES HAHAHAHA CHANTAO
Bi Jongin and her fear of solid romantic relationships and fanily problems and brotherly soo and adorable life is so lovely and I absolutely love the sense of reality to this world OuO
wildvampire
#9
Chapter 4: Okay im not abig fan of genrder bender stories but this was absolutely amazing and i just loved it so much
I was speechless
Like i can not begin to explain how much i enjoyed this!!! Lots of loveeee this was perffff
fani437
#10
Chapter 4: Aww this was so CUTE!
Baby Sehunnie sounds cute ^-^
And I could so totally imagine
Luhan as a woman, it took some
time with Yixing and Jongin though XD
I absolutely loved this!!!
Elisa-chann
#11
I don't even ship Kailu but this was really beautiful !! <3<3
Also, after reading this I was left with a craving for pastries ;--; damn kyungsoo
hoshispace
#12
I LOVE PREGNANCY STORIES OTL and i am in love with this one, they way every thing builds up and how i can feel jongins pain </3 i'll forever hope for spin offs of this, specially xiulay and tao finally getting fed up and kissing chanyeol hahahahaahah kid sehun too, bc thats way too cute-- and i still think the stranger was kris, idk why lmao anyway, i loved this!!! <333
Rb2012 #13
Chapter 4: Aaaaaaaaaah loved the story . Really enjoyed reading.
Lu_bubi #14
Chapter 4: So adorableeee, first time reading (and liking) girlxgirl fic :33333
lastrainhome
#15
Chapter 4: I don't normally read gender benders but ohmygod this was far too cute and I'm so glad I gave it a chance and to hell with grammar and punctuation THIS IS SO FLUFFEH. And real. I mean, it's so, so, so goddamn real. It's insane. And I love Jongin's crying spells
ticha_11
#16
Chapter 4: This was so adorable, i am goin to dieee ^.^
haeoppar
#17
i already read this on lj and im halfway through rereading this here and OH MY GOD let me just comment on the baked goods which i failed to point out on lj!!! SERIOUSLY THE ES AND S SOMEONE HELP!!!!! KYUNGSOO WHY!!!!!! (((and i absolutely adore kaisoo's friendship
MickeyC7914
#18
Chapter 4: THIS IS PRECIOUS I CRY
Mutantbic
#19
Chapter 4: Beautiful (: Jongin is so precious and luhan amazinggggg. I loved tao and his pursuit of chanyeol (legs for dayyyyyys haha) I love this.

(I'll refrain from correcting any details of the birth scene unless you want advice. It's really just the order of events post birth. No biggy)