Chapter 1: Chapter 1: This was so good! I absolutely love it!
It started out so dark and was really leading to that sad, angsty ending--I was already preparing myself to cry my eyes out. But you really surprised me by giving it a sudden twist, leading us to a more hopeful path and ending it with all the sweetness in the world. I really like your writing-style too, I loved your word choices and way of constructing the story. I'm so glad I found this fic!
Chapter 1: Omgg this oneshot was gorgeous. Perhaps felt a little darker than Nocturna Supressio, but it probably has to do with the fact that you see the story through the eyes of the spectator this time around, instead of the victim. I honestly can't be sure if Suho was bad after all, but I guess he was, since Sehun said Suho had already asked him to stay? Thanks for this great oneshot *0* I'm off to read Soul Eater now lol
Chapter 1: Goddd this fic is so A+. My feelings were mixed up and uneasy. I was so afraid Sehun would disappear in the end. I was so mad at Luhan who held himself back /although I know it was reasonable/ T.T I'm feeling relieved now
Thank you so much for this fic!
Just to clarify tho: the nightmares that Sehun had. They are thought to be sweet dreams becuz Suho's all understanding and nice to Sehun (and the latter loved the former), but are actually nightmares becuz Shun was life out of Sehun in the nightmare (s) rite?
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