Chapter 1: waaah, im in this story.. though unnie hope you adjust the spacing, its making confuse, like i though jae was still talking but later on it was yunho so yeah, about the grammar im fine with it, only the spacing all the best unnie and can't wait for the continuation of this story of urs, hwaiting!!! ^-^

Chapter 1: it's an interesting plot and I'd love to find out more...i can tolerate the grammar since I can see that it's not your first language...but if only you could adjust the spacing and the paragraph? i was having a hard time to figure who's talking to who...
Thanks & Hwaiting~^^

Chapter 1: It's an interesting story but can you pls check your grammar and spelling? It hinders reading. Thank you and fighting.