Chapter 1: It's awesome ><
Please make it the chaptered version, so that we know every single thing happened and how suffered yixing was. it would be great for sure :)
Thanks for writing such a nice fic ^^

Chapter 1: No. Wait. What? Yixing was molested by his mum's lover and his mum kept mum about it?! Whatthefreakinghell? But yeah. That's my only complain. ): anyway, if you would pardon me, but the past tense for weep is wept. :x

Chapter 1: Was great. I liked it.

Good idea, Updatee! ;u;

I like this idea, update soon, neh? ^^

This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^

Why oh why do I get the feeling that Lay got and is pregnant ): I hope it's not the case and its my mind being super tired and weird... But saying that, this sounds real interesting! Anticipating for the first chapter! Please update soon (:

These are Lay's thoughts correct? It sounds interesting. Please update soon.