Awww~ I like this so much!! <3
It's my first time ever reading OOR fanfiction, I'm so exciteeed >///< I love the ToruKa pairing, and the fluff you write is so cute...
Plus, Dreamer the dog makes it a hundred times better!
Just read till ch. 16 because I really need to go to bed now, but I'll surely keep on reading! :)
Chapter 15: Yuka definitely is a weird girl. Poor Hiro. But it's a good thing he found out about it so soon. But Rin seems quite nice so far and definitely like a much better person than her sister.
And even Hiro already figured out that Toru and Taka are together xD
Chapter 14: First it was Taka and now Yuka tries it with his brother? Okay. I don't really think she's the right one for Hiro but we'll see how this goes, I guess. And I understand Taka's reaction when the little one gets lost and ends up at some party. Might be a little overprotective but it's an understandable reaction.
Chapter 13: I can only repeat over and over again how cute they are together ♥ And I wasn't surprised that Tomoya and Ryota already noticed the change or that they don't mind them being together.
I like how Taka takes his big-brother job so serious :D But I totally understand he wants to protect his cute little brother~
Chapter 12: Dreamer likes to interrupt sweet moments, huh? I understand that Toru isn't too happy about having the dog between them, especially with such a smell. Not exactly a very romantic first night as a couple xD
Chapter 11: Toru always spacing out and Taka immediately guessed what's going on. The leader is a little obvious xD But Taka's reaction is so cute. I can totally imagine him bouncing through the room like a child. They're simply perfect together ♥
Chapter 10: Toru always manages to end up in weird situations, huh? But at least he didn't have to admit he was stalking Taka xD The last sentence and Toru's though really made me smile. This is so cute. I wish him the best of luck for this thought to turn into reality.
Chapter 9: Toru is such an idiot xD It's either jealousy or he should go visit a psychiatrist if he has random wishes to punch other people for no reason. It's so cute how Taka always acts as dog-daddy and thinks so much about what's best for Dreamer.
Now I'm curious if Toru really wants to stalk Taka on his date and if he manages to follow him without being seen. I somehow doubt he'll be very successful but I'll wait and see what happens next.
Chapter 8: Interesting idea with the costumes. And I wasn't surprised about the fact that Tomoya enjoyed walking around as a chicken. Taka must be cute in the pig costume, especially when he's pouting. I wonder how they even managed to get anything done during practice with those two in the costumes and the sounds xD
Chapter 7: This chapter really made me burst out laughing. When I read "light saber" it was already clear the idiot had to be Taka but in his boxers? But I can kinda imagine him really doing something like this when he's drunk...Must be funny and embarrassing at the same time to watch this happen.
Besides, it's very sweet how Toru worries about the others and goes looking for them to make sure they're alright. Fits his role as the "mother".
Awesome chapter again. I'm really looking forward to the next one and thank you for writing this story.
Chapter 6: Toru is quite clumsy, huh? But it suits him to not even manage to control a little puppy xD He really shouldn't blame Dreamer, neither should he blame Taka. In my opinion Toru himself is at fault for ending up in the pond. Silly leader xP
As for the question about shipping the two...I would totally love you if you'd do that because they are my OTP but if you decide to keep it on a friendship-level I'd still love the story and keep on reading :D
Chapter 5: Haha, oh my...I would love to see Toru's face when he stepped into Dreamer's little "present". Not the nicest thing to experience but his expression must be hilarious.
Sorry for not commenting on the other chapters, I'm always lazy with such things but I definitely have to say I love the story and it made me laugh several times already. Keep it up ;D
Chapter 4: aaa its so cute please do continue haha
lol i think i might end up shipping toru/taka since both are my top 2 after all n had to admit theyre cute together :P
thank you n cant wait for more :D
aww taka is so cute :3 cant imagine if taka lose his amazing voice ah but thank god the other three take a good care of him. and tomoya's driving turtle-speed like make me laugh so hard xD
i love both chapters! Hope to see more! :D
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