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lucidhoney10
#1
Chapter 6: Just found this stroy and I could say that this story really caught my interest.
I don't know why but I could felt like their death were arranged by their sitting position in the roller coaster before. So if that was true, then it should be Chen who is the next victim, am I right? Well, it just my random guess though. About the note, let me guess it too. 091011 sounds like a date. If it talking about Korea, then it must be 11 October 2009 since Korean always write years first then followed by month and date. And that was no doubt a Sunday so the first note and second note were related. The third note is 0300 sounds like a time. So maybe it talks about something that happening on Sunday, 11 Oct 2009 at 03:00. Maybe it tells about their friend/someone they knew who died/disappear that day who is now hunting 'em and want to get revenge because of her death. (I assume the spirit is a girl since it's a girl reflection on Suho's picture at chap.2)
I don't know if it was true or not 'causw it just my random guess. But to tell the truth, I was very curious with what would come after this. So, I hope you could update ASAP author-nim! Your story really intersting! Good job for ya and fighting!! ^_^
P/S : Lay death's were really tragic since he commited suicide. I didn't expect that, actually. I really start to think that EXO boy's should gather up in one place together so they could protect each other.
ELF687
#2
Chapter 6: that's scareeeeeyyy...gulpyy
KailoverforeverEXO #3
Chapter 6: 0300???
U-kiss song. kekekekkee! >_<
anywayplease u[date soon
i'm waiting
kpop4girl
#4
Chapter 6: Nooooo....!!!????!?!?!?!??!
lay...whyyyyy?? why u need to do this!!!>?
TTTTTT_____________TTTTTTT


authornim, can I request something?
please save my kai.. Puuutakkhae!
Jaimiegarth
#5
Chapter 6: there must be something hidden!!baaaaahhh!
naringgit #6
Chapter 6: its hard not to curse when you're in the same situation,heu..
wow,,an attack of updates!love it!so suho-D.O-lay..it must have connections with the notes,,and some arrangements..but i can't think of anything right now,,still in a daze :Q
even in a devastating mode,cheonsa still can't get used to kris's handomse face *who can either way? XD
yijuuu
#7
Chapter 6: gosh.. i'm so confused about the bloody notes =_= what exactlly is happening?! omg this is so addicting
michelle0_0 #8
Chapter 6: what is all that red-mark-things?!!!
aigoo... so frustrated!!
please update soon!!!
kazuyashi
#9
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GummyChanyeol #10
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More chanyeol parts, please?
GummyChanyeol #11
Chapter 5: Cliffhanger. I hate you!
Update faster, authornim! I'm dying to know who is he?
Can I guess?
I bet he's Xiumin. Lol. Kidding. I hope that ahjussi is just trolling them
GummyChanyeol #12
Chapter 4: Whoaaaa, are they going to search for the ahjussi? I'm excited!
D.O is dead? Waaaa :'(
I hope my Chanyeol won't die like him. Please, authornim?
GummyChanyeol #13
Chapter 3: Poor Suho! //cry a river
That girl is so nappa!
What is 091011 anyway? 9,10,11
0+9+1+0+1+1 = 12??

P/s: still waiting for their comeback!
GummyChanyeol #14
Chapter 2: ROFL, Chanyeol is so cute here!
More parts of him, please? *wink wink*
Who is that guy? Seems creepy
GummyChanyeol #15
Chapter 1: OMG! This is scary! //gulp
Gonna read chapter 2 now
Song_Jimin
#16
Chapter 3: The first chapter on the rollercoaster part was from final destination 3. now on chapter 2 on Suho's death is from the movie phobia 3. What's next? I wonder
Song_Jimin
#17
Chapter 3: The first chapter on the rollercoaster part was from final destination 3. now on chapter 2 on Suho's death is from the movie phobia 3. What's next? I wonder
Song_Jimin
#18
Chapter 1: Just like final destination 3
EXOInMyheaaart
#19
Chapter 1: this is scary @.@ gulphh
KailoverforeverEXO #20
Chapter 5: who;s nexttt! ppalli update :-O
kpop4girl
#21
Chapter 5: finally an update
thx unnie
-fumieSusada #22
Chapter 5: and again ? aisyyyyy ! pls not chen or kris TT-TT
ELF687
#23
Chapter 5: whoo??? whoo!
updateeee plz
namiadarina
#24
Chapter 5: wwwooooooooooooooowww!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u updated! this is superb amazing!
MrsLay
#25
Chapter 5: Finally! An update from you, Grandma! ^^ I'm so curious what might happen next//SHINee Sherlock( Clue+Note)
missfilipinoELF #26
Chapter 5: hoooo i am getting goosebumps. ;_;
exoticv-i-p
#27
Update soon!!! :D
exoluhan4ever #28
Chapter 4: wow.. it was scary btw it's supposed to be Do Kyungsoo right? ahahha, sometimes i get mixed up with Do Kyungsoo and Kim Myungsoo too! :D
2pmfan4ever
#29
Chapter 1: update soon!
naringgit #30
Chapter 4: say what??
that fast?it's only a day from suho's death..
does it means every single day would have the word death on it?
and what is the meaning of "sunday"????
LittleMissJNJ
#31
Chapter 4: Omg the way D.O died...
KailoverforeverEXO #32
Chapter 4: D.O T_______________T
i still can't figure it the reason 'why'
there must something relate to that ahjusi
(just my guess, anyway)
this story makes me curious
update soon dear author..
ELF687
#33
Chapter 4: they need to find that creepy ahjusi.he might knew something and probably could save them.Thank God Kris had soften.Ppali find him, KRIS!!!Save all the EXO members!
eleonora
#34
Chapter 4: D_O!! The old man is right..
namiadarina
#35
Chapter 4: ...

how can u make suho and d.o die??!!!

are u planning to vanish the exo? lol

izz and thie are going to scream for this. hahaha
ReaTSQA
#36
Chapter 4: OMG that is way creepy and sad... And why them...?! Like why EXO dying.... T^T
yunanononanoona
#37
Chapter 4: Is it really a coincidence or what ???? Keep updating authornim
-fumieSusada #38
Chapter 4: no no no no!
again !!!
D.O! :'-(
i still can't get it why.
it must be something hidden!!

by the way
i love kris character's.
he makes me fall in love with him.
being a girlfriend to him
is like a HEAVEN.
holy crappp!
kpop4girl
#39
Chapter 4: D.O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jaimiegarth
#40
Chapter 4: I just hope that ajjusi will help them overcome it..gulp
naringgit #41
Chapter 3: oh i think i now kim cheonsa,,she's one of my friend in the AFF..ooh she's so lucky she got to be kris's girlfriend..i'm proud of you my friend
i think this is a mix of final destination and another horror-thriller movie but i forget the title
anyway,it's interesting :)
baekskimchi
#42
Reminds me of Final Destination.. /shudders

NUUUUU JOONMYUNNIE ;___;

lol bini Dato' LCW buat cameo di sini? Haha jk jk XD

Update soon, hwaiting :D
eleonora
#43
Chapter 3: It's begin...
ReaTSQA
#44
Chapter 3: Omona.... The angel suho died.... This also proves not to text or talk to strangers >.< I luv the story plot~ Keep it up and update soon~~ Hwaiting!
exomelodies
#45
Chapter 3: Nooo sweet Suho died I'm going to find that girl lol
yunanononanoona
#46
Chapter 3: Who the heck is the girl ? It was thrilling actually ;) keel updating author-nim
KailoverforeverEXO #47
Chapter 3: Suho :'c
nooooooooooooooooooo
andueyooooo
nooooooooooo
sob sob sob
i guess the ahjushi bad aura was damnnn right!
goshhhh!
ahjushi!!!
who's next??
save them!!!!!!!!
:'C
kpop4girl
#48
Chapter 3: (+)update soon,authornim.i adore this story v.muchiess
kpop4girl
#49
Chapter 3: i love suhooooo! no. he should not die! btw,kris is my lover!how can my life be more interesting?XDhehehehe
Jaimiegarth
#50
Chapter 3: why suho must dead?andwaeyooo!by the way,i love kris and cheonsa partXD very romantic.and what?i am cheonsa!!superb!
ELF687
#51
Chapter 3: bull____t.he's dead!:Onooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!
-fumieSusada #52
Chapter 3: Jesus!!!
Oh crap!!!!!!
why?why?why????
why my suho!
OH NO!
The old man 'aura' was true!!!!
nooooo!!!
namiadarina
#53
Chapter 3: what thee~~~ why suho's dead???

WHYY?????????????

god. at the entrance of this fic, u already make a person dead. u are so evil..


and, there's one mistake i would like to pick out.


when u were exclaiming 'Suho's dead! Suho was dead!'
there's a grammar mistake there.
-Suho's dead (present tense)
-Suho was dead (past tense)

choose either one sis! :D

glad u manage to update in time before i sleep :D
zhaelle
#54
Chapter 1: Is Final Destination your inspiration for this fic? It's cool though :)
amyzanaLovesTaeTiSeo #55
Chapter 1: Omo. Maybe he can predict the future ._. New reader here !! *waves*
-fumieSusada #56
Chapter 2: who's that ahjussi????
gooooshhhhh!
anyway,
keep updating
JadelySong17
#57
Chapter 2: Did u got inspired by Final Destination?
I think i like this! And the old man....im so curious!
yunanononanoona
#58
Chapter 2: Omo this is such a good story.. Keep updating ^^
KailoverforeverEXO #59
Chapter 2: ok
this story makes me feel uncomfortable
you need to update fast
i can't wait to read it
Jaimiegarth
#60
Chapter 2: and now i gt that 'bad aura'!suhooooo!!!!oh jesus!
Lowra98
#61
The story kinda reminds me of Final Destination ( I think that's what the movie was called) Instead its the girl that gets the visions of death and then she tries to save the people. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE :D
eleonora
#62
Chapter 2: I guess the old man is true
blissful
#63
wow it sounds really interesting!
ELF687
#64
lol.the same daddy in one more chance right?XDlol
kpop4girl
#65
Chapter 2: woowww.pdate soon!
KailoverforeverEXO #66
Chapter 2: please save my kai authorssi
huhu
bad aura? waaarghh
thats a gift
i wonder there must be something hidden right?
namiadarina
#67
Chapter 2: actually~~

what does gege means?? *smile sheepishly*
EnjoyLuhansMayo
#68
Chapter 1: Annyeong,neighbour ~
Your story reminds me of final destination :) Well,it seems interesting,though..click to subscribe button,then ^^
KailoverforeverEXO #69
Chapter 1: horror mystery thriller and KAIIIIII!!
I am IN LOVE with this story
-fumieSusada #70
Chapter 1: Interesting story
So, kris has the vision
he saved their lives
and he became my hero
soooooo coooool
eleonora
#71
Chapter 1: thx for req this story to me! I luv this! >.<
I love horror I love thriller I love mystery
XxIYaxX
#72
Chapter 1: Hello~ you sent a request! I will fulfill your wish! Sowoneul maribwa! Hahahahahaha. I really like how this story is starting off and it really sounds interesting so I will be anticipating for the next chappie! Though it sort of reminds me of The Golden Hotel series in AFF... Have you read these fics yet? I wonder if Kris is dead or if it was just a dream... Be sure to plan you're plot wisely because this sounds like a really good story. Thanks for letting me read this! I'll subscribe now!!
yeonnievein
#73
Chapter 1: Whoa, interesting! And it sounded like final destination keke
yankee17zelo #74
Chapter 1: oh gosh! this is interesting. did you based it on final destination?