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meridias
#1
Chapter 1: oh man this is intense!
aryadrottning #2
Chapter 5: WHERES YONGGUK D':
bdz357998 #3
Chapter 5: Noooo someone help!!! Save daehyun!!! T.T Please update soon!!
chillua
#4
Chapter 5: omG THIS FIC WHY DID I ONLY READ IT NAO OMG WHY SO PERF YOUR WRITING IS PERF OMG AND PLS I NEED MORE MOUTH ING OR ABUSING DAE NEEDS TO BE ED RN EITHER YONGGUK OR THOSE BASTARD PLS DO IT NAO AUTHORNIM IM SO WET SO MOIST U HAVE TO SAVE ME
consensualkink
#5
daehyunnie getting his face screwed is not enough yah noona noona yah yah yAH NOONA
givivi123 #6
Chapter 5: Yonggukkie, come save DaeDae, NOW! Anyway, Author-nim, will you be updating anytime soon?
anikounnie
#7
Chapter 5: update soon!! i want to know what will happen DD8 pleeeease!!! x_x
daefoodangercookie
#8
Even if I don't really like Daehyun being almost assaulted here, I like how this fic 'walks slowly', the tempo isn't rushed so I as a reader could really absorb the situation and how the characters felt. This is great <3
Jackson00
#9
Chapter 2: i like the idea of an almost kiss.
EdenCelia
#10
Chapter 5: D: Please update soon! This is a terrible place to leave Daehyun! He needs saving! And Youngguk needs to take care of him. There's a certain kind of pride/pity that you have in Daehyun in this, to be so fearless in dealing with the inevitable of his illness, but this is too much!

I can't imagine a scarier situation, but on top of that, you can't see! He could run into these same men two days later and not even know, except to hear them speak. :( We need closure! Please keep going!!
heeyoung_kwon #11
Chapter 5: Oh no no no no noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Someone, ANYONE, pls save Daehyunnie X(((((((((((
Reya_K #12
Chapter 5: damn *cries*
sick bastards
i hope someone will help Daehyun before something worse happens
decalcomania #13
Chapter 5: Wow. Wonderful wording, amazing imagery. I'd say it's beautiful but this scene isn't really one that evokes beauty. Nonetheless, it's almost refreshing to read scenes like this, very graphic and very real, not just glanced over like some authors do. I'm anticipating you next update ^^
NinjaAngel #14
Chapter 5: SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME THOSE GUYS DIDNT JUST DO THAT TO DAE. ASDFGHJKL!! I'LL KILL THOSE GUYS FOR HURTING A POOR BLIND (not to mention beautiful) BOY. Nooooo! After this I'm sure Dae will feel that he is dirty and he will think that he doesnt deserve Bang and he will avoid Bang. Please don't let him do that. Let them be like magnets that always attract to each other no matter what. AND LET BANG BEAT THE CRAP OUT OF THOSE FILTHY UGLY MORON BASTARD FOR THE INNOCENT DAE!
KING24
#15
Chapter 5: Awwwww... WAE??? Poor Daehyun... he's blind and can't do a damn thing while these guys beat on him like this, and make him ____ his ... Omg!!! Can someone... Anyone please come and Beat the ____ out of this Dude... He's about to ____ Dae... Nooooo!!! -cries-
mikazuki_angel #16
Chapter 5: Okay, so this is something major. Yongguk, now you have to hunt these guys down and kill them. They're violating my poor Daehyunie!!! YOUR DAEHYUNIE!!!

I did not want this to happen, but it happened. I want to kill that person Daehyun works with. Friend or not, this is so uncool. I mean, Daehyun must not be that far from where that "friend" left him at. Argh!! Those bozos!! I can't believe this, but this actually happens in real life too. TT^TT I am so upset and just ripped to shreds now.

Oh my heart! It's literally dying. Daehyun!! Please let there be a miracle and Daehyun grab a rock or dirt/mud and whiff it at them or something. /sniffling/ oh that's just going to make it worst for Daehyun... /UGLYSOBS/

Oh...the agony...what to do? Waiting for update...

<3
Natashax3
#17
Chapter 5: Poor daehyun, he's blind and it's hard for him to get away from those bastards.
someone has to save him DX
i hope
inftocean
#18
Chapter 5: omaiya!! NO!!!!!!! Daehyuunieee... ;_;
ItsLily #19
Chapter 5: OMG those guys are evil. Poor daehyun.
Are they going to take away his ity...
Yongguk go find your baby T.T
Please Update soon. I need to know moreee
XxWidaXx
#20
Chapter 5: Omg....they're still not over torturing Dae?! Poor Daehyunnie! ;A; Why did his friend even leave him in first place~~ Omg, anyone....save Daehyun!
Update soon ^^