Chapter 39: Wow, this was amazing. It felt like I'm watching Japanese horror movie in my mind. It was really rare to find horror fan fiction in this AFF. However, I'm glad I could find one which was your story. :) It was really interesting that Mao was internally fighting with Yuki abut her darkness nature that she wouldn't admit it. I thought it was due to her having schizophrenia or hallucinations since she was traumatized. But nope, that monster was indeed a real thing. It seek for attention and care just what Mao had wanted in her life but she just kept it too herself. After all her life seemed revolved with her taking care of her brother instead of herself. That's why Yuki was exist. That's what I think since Mao was Yuki's creator. Anyway, love your story! ♥
Chapter 39: Omg, honestly, I expected the exact opposite to happen.
I loved that ending, it just seemed so fitting.
Gah!!
No words, it was just awesome :D
Sorry I haven't commented in the longest, life caught up with me >.>
I'm glad Satoshi is still alright, but I keep fearing the worst xD (of course!) And it seems like Yuki is just getting more upset with Mao every passing day. I know she wants Mao's attention, but I'd be having trouble loving someone that tells me to kill too. So, in a way, I suppose Mao is a monster for listening in the same way the Yuki is a monster for prompting her to kill..Gah! My mind is confused now, I don't even know if that made sense. But awesome updates, thanks~! :)
The monster seems more and more like Frankenstein, but in this case, it's inside its creator instead of being a separate entity.
Idk why, but I always felt like Haruka was the type to just kill Mao on the spot xD She must have something else up her sleeve >.>
O.O Major cliffhanger! Can't wait to see all the ideas you have for this fic!
Also, no matter how many times I read that it's a woman in a white dress, I always picture a little girl in a white dress xD Lol, I suppose my mind makes me think of children every time I think about innocence. In a way, I don't feel the monster is evil, even though it has killed so many. I suppose it depends on how you look at it. :)
When you said that the monster was always part of Mao, I took it as being the murderous intent that all people have, but that they keep suppressed for moral reasons. As in, everyone has the ability to kill when their survival is in jeopardy. This instinct is usually suppressed today because religion and codes of morality have deemed that it's wrong to kill. I feel like this 'Monster' is simply this instinct that has become more of a separate entity now, with a different appearance than Mao. I believe the reason the Monster is resentful is because it does not understand why it's a Monster if it's only an instinct to survive? Idk, does that make sense? Funny how a simple sentence can be so intriguing xD
Ok, I'll say now that I am so relieved Satoshi is not dead, although, I am hoping now that Jun doesn't die. I have a feeling that he inevitably will :'(
And as all this goes on, I'm wondering what the little girl and her mom are thinking as they hear this. If that would have been me, I would have been like, "Can you like...leave?" You know, so that the monster won't get completely angry and kill me too >.>
Dude.....the monster is sooooo freaky!
Gah, I'm not gonna lie, I cringed a little at this chapter because the detail successfully made a picture in my mind, and it kinda scared me >.> Still, I am loving this fic so much~!
More and more twists and turns, I'm loving this!
Jun is eeevvvilll >:D
Ever since I saw Haruka Ayase in Tatta Hitotsu no Koi, I've really liked her acting skills, and I think she would make a badass character in this. :)
O.O
At first, I was really worried until she met up with Jun. I got this warm feeling inside because it was just too cute how he comforted her, but then at the end, honestly I was in shock! Inadvertly, she killed some young kids? :O This just keeps getting bloodier, more sad, and definitely more interesting :)
RL is definitely kicking in and I try to find the time to read all my favorite fics.
Ok where to start.
I ain't too sure if Mao is the monster maybe she is maybe she isn't call me an idiot but I feel that just maybe when she turns maybe someone besides Mao could be the monster (I'm not saying she is). Anyways I feel that Jun might just have something to do with it (I'm just guessing plus I could be wrong). But I feel how Mao is responsible for curing her little brother but now shes having major problems within herself. So I hope Jun might be able to help her and that nothing goes wrong with Satoshi.
So looking forward to more updates and I've enjoyed reading my favorite Mao-chan ^^v.
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