Chapter 19: Re-reading This Story Cuz I Suddenly Remember About It
I Hope You Still Can Continue This Story Authornim No Pressure Tho Hehe
Anyway Fighting^^
Chapter 8: It would be awesome to get Mina's POV. I'd like to see what went through her head during her time spent with Momo, and Momo eye ing her constantly.
Chapter 18: OKAY BUT THIS IS SO GOOD!!!! def one of my favorite Twice fics so far. I love that you reference real dance choreography, and the is good ;) I really like the character development of Yeri, and the dynamic between her and Momo and her, Momo, and Mina.
Chapter 1: Hullo there (fellow lesbian and dragon lover lol),
I just did something I rarely, if ever, do. I upvoted this fic having only read the first chapter because I like it THAT much. The writing is extremely well done. Nayeon and Momo’s friendship is ridiculously cute and I’ve only got a tiny glimpse into their relationship. I’m sure it can only get better as I read on further. I like their personalities so much and I feel invested in them already.
Your style of writing is really pleasurable to read and I had to laugh a little at the 15-minute-to-wake computer jab. I can commiserate! lol
I don’t have a single complaint so far; every word you’ve used is just perfect. I am very happy to have come upon this story and I can’t wait to continue on this lovely journey. Thank you for sharing your creativity and it is very much appreciated!
Chapter 18: Welcome back author-nim i write this comment first thing i got here hehe now if you will excuse me i will read the absolutely great chapter above
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