Chapter 3: 2nd chapter! Good job on it by the way!
Aerin’s Just unwillingly getting ready to get involved with pretty much everything, poor her just wanting to have a peaceful day in a cafe. And don’t even get me started on the matters concerning the other downworlders and that Aiden.
Chapter 2: Oof first chapter!! Gosh thank you so much for allowing William and Gabriel to appear so much and also James to make a cameo <3333
Haha from the beginning William and Kain are already starting to fight XD typical of them
And William hinting at his gayness I LOVE THAT PART
Hmmm arranged marriage that's interesting though I suppose that happened a lot in the original series also (that reminds me I need to get back and read it again dang
Also oooh is there a warlock behind the scenes working out everything and manipulating people? Or is it something darker like trying to invade the Seoul institute or something? I can't wait for your next chapter www good luck writing!!
Chapter 14: AHHH, I'm so sorry I haven't commented in so long! Besides the fact that this comment is super late, I like the chapters! There are some grammatical errors and it's a little confusing at times, but I got the overall gist! And Kain my man, is real smooth. Props off to him for kissing Aerin like that, not that I blame her for slapping him afterwards XD
Chapter 9: oooh new layout looks nice!
sorry i haven't been very active :( very busy time of the year for me. I'll do my best to be back as soon as i can!
Chapter 13: So Kain has found his match on William? xD But it's so many Shadowhunters that I will need to make a map of relations, cause I feel that otherwise I will get confused :')
And I'm sorry for all the trouble Kaleb has to face because of those guys :')
Chapter 11: ^^ Thanks for choosing Noel as Kain's Parabatai~ And I really like the 'teaser' you have for Noel and Cloud. It goes from a Fairy Tale wedding, to the bride slaying some demons no sweat XD Awesome. And don't forget Kain watching in the background with some popcorn~
Chapter 5: XD I'd have a hard time too. I think it'd be fine if you opened more space for Shadow Hunters, like, Kain can have a whole Shadow Hunter gang at his arsenal (beck and call). Imagine trying to go up against Kain, and suddenly you find like 7 other Hunters behind him cracking their knuckles? XD Or something like that.
Chapter 8: Love the teaser ! Elsie and Kaleb's interaction is great :D And Kain really needs to chill with the overprotectiveness lol.
I saw in the reviews that someone applied as Elsie's parabatai, I'm fine with it if you want to give her a parabatai ^^
I can't wait to read more !
Chapter 8: Eyyy new teaser!! I like how they met because she mistook him for a vampire. Wow Kain needs to chill hahahaha he is willing to kill Keleb if he gets to close with her.
Chapter 5: Okay so here's the thing; I have a shadowhunter character and I really want his love interest to be a shadowhunter as well, but since you said it's best not to apply for two shadowhunter plots, what should I do?
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