i am asking help because i know that there are people with a big heart here. my friend is crying overnight because of the essay she needs to submit on a company for her scholarship grant that will help her go to college and fulfill her dreams. i did my best to help her edit some parts but i, myself is not satisfied (like i just ruined it). so for writers or readers out there willing to help this friend of mine, your help will be so much appreciated. have a good day!