If i post another story, will you read it?

So yeah. I was playing The Sims 2 Castaway.

When my writing instincts bugged me. I thought of writing a story similar to the game.

Of course the title is Castaway. I'm still thinking of a main character. But the first one that popped in my mind is Jackson of GOT7.

So the story goes like this, Jackson is a rich guy who decided to spend his christmas vacation on a cruise. (Yeah since i never wrote about a christmas vacation yet i'm gonna do it now) While the girl, Sung Sanghoon (The subscriber in my story My Voodoo Boy recognize this name very well. Sorry i ran out of ideas. ._.) Is a waitress working in the cruise with his Boyfriend (Kwon Jiyong (G-Dragon) ) and Mother (Kim Haesook. (I really like her tbh.) ) 

But her relationship with G-Dragon is not that strong. It's like, she accepted him just because he's been there for her always, she knows that Jiyong really likes her to death. You know what i mean. (To make it simple their relationship is like Mary Jane and her Fiancée in Spiderman 2)

Suddenly the cruise gone loco, the lights went of, the motor went off and the paddle crashed to a small iceberg causing the ship to shaken a little. Jackson and Sanghoon who is standing near by the rails fell onto the water THEN BAM!!

That's all. *BOW*

So what do you think?

If you want to add something just comment below. I'm willing, 100% open and want to hear your opinions

Ideas are accepted. (That's if you want to add something) <3 :3

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minxdahye94
#1
Ok, seems interesting but, isn't it a bit cliche'?? Rich guy likes a poor women or master fall in love with maid... I find this kind of story boring and irritating because its like a modern cinderella story minus the step mom and step sis part... I do hope that your story will be different... Totally different from the cliche' story I've read... I won't judge your story now... I'll read it first and then, I'll judge it carefully and unbiasedly... Oh, for the girl lead, can you make another name for it?? It just that there's many girls idol name that you could use, but why Sanghoon?? And no, I don't hate the name really... Just curious to what is so special about that name that you use it again in this fanfic?? Just curious... Oh, can you make a story about my bias, Min Miss A?? Or you could put her in this story if you don't mind really... Its up to you... You're the writer... I'm just a readee and could only give opinion and suggestion... I anticipating this new story... It seems fun and cool with the cruise stuff... I've never ride one in all my 20 years life... The one who could afford riding it only the superly rich person... xoxoxo
bebearmony
#2
Seems interesting!
Willing to read if you do post it!