FIRST CHINESE FANFICTION

I am a Singaporean and that means I speak both Chinese and English. Unfortunately, my Chinese standard has never been good enough for me to express my feelings freely in that language. I've always dreamed of writing fanfiction both in English and in Chinese but I've never dared to write anything with that Chinese standard of mine. T________________________________________T 

 

Until today.

 

It was supposed to be an update on The Phone Call but somehow, I just couldn't express my feelings in the English language today. :( I then thought to myself, aish, since I can't write it in English, why not write it in Chinese? >< As I typed, the few sentences started linking to each other and soon, a drabble was created right before my eyes.

 

I'm still nervous about it but I understand that I will NEVER improve if I don't put it out there to get flamed. :( But please, be gentle with me. This is really my FIRST fic in Chinese. ;(

 

So without further ado, here goes my super lousy Chinese standard writing:

 

“但愿时间能停留在过去的回忆里 ,因为我还没有失去你的勇气。”

 

 

时间过了,伤也痊愈了。曾经那狂野的爱情故事现今也只成了人生中的一个小站点。就如一枚枯萎的花朵般,那故事随着迎来的风飘走了,消失得无影无踪。或许自己还保有些遗憾吧,在中嘀咕地想起着过去的时光,但有了遗憾又能怎样呢?时间不能倒流,死人也不能复活,就算有了遗憾,他也没办法。人生还有很长的路要走。他也只能背着这些遗憾继续往前走,一起与身边的亲朋好友迈向人生的终点站。

 

 

“在想些什么呢?” 允浩好奇问道,“想到那么入神。叫你三次了都没反应!”

 

 

说着说着,允浩嘟起了,语气稍微不耐烦地瞪着眼前的人——金在中。

 

 

“没什么啦!” 在中笑着回应道,“我只是想起过去的事情罢了!”

 

 

“你想想,我们现在不是很快乐吗?” 他继续说着。“为此,难道你不感到很幸运吗?别人想要我们这么幸福恐怕还没那么容易呢。”

 

 

允浩邹了邹眉头,满脸不屑。“你又在想些什么东西呀?没头没理的!真跟不上你的思想路程。什么幸福不幸福的。说什么怪东西。”

 

 

“什么怪东西啊!” 在中不满抱怨道,“人家可是很认真,很严肃地在跟你交换心头,你在那边胡扯什么!”

 

 

“我没有胡扯啊。事情本来就没什么问题的干嘛要把它想到那么复杂啊?什么叫幸运?什么叫幸福?不就是天天和你所爱的人在一起就叫做最幸福的幸运了吗?”

 

 

允浩这么的一爆发就完全把在中给说傻了,怔怔地看着他,一言不发。

 

 

“喂!你怎么了?吓傻啦?” 允浩温柔地骂道。

 

 

见着允浩带点焦虑的眼神地望着自己,在中终于回过神来。

 

 

“没什么。” 他眯着眼睛笑道,”只是很感激上帝让我遇见我人生中最幸福的幸运:你。”

 

 

说完,在中轻了允浩的脸颊,使他害羞得红了起来,整张脸顿时如苹果般鲜艳,立刻引起了旁人的注目。听着旁人的闲言闲语,又望着眼前快被气疯的允浩先生,在中打从心里地开怀大笑了,完全忽略了可怜的允浩的感受。

 

 

“幸福或许就是那么容易争取的吧!” 在中感叹道,“不管之前所承受过的伤害,不理过去所持有的遗憾,只要继续往人生的道路前进,迟早有一天一定会遇上专属于自己的幸福,而就在相遇的那一分秒钟,这偶然的相遇会被称为最幸福的幸运。"

 

 

——结束——

 

So, how did you find it? ><

 

Please tell me if it's still horrible. I'll stop if that's the case. :((

 

P.S. I might/might not translate this fic into English, seeing as this is just a drabble with not much plot in it.

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UknowMi
#1
Waaaah if only i can understand chinesse, but with you im sure its just as great as your other fics, all the best, just post it hehehe ^-^