The Young, the Reckless and the Clever

By : flowergirl

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Title : 19 / 20

When I scrolled down the Infinite fanfic, my eyes immediately attracted to the title of your fanfic. It sounds different from any other fanfic and somehow I can sense this sad, angsty feeling on it. It also brings suspense to the readers, like questioning about the identity of this three person.  The title is good enough to attract reader's attention, but I personally liked it if you let the 'T' in 'the' to be in capital letter to make it neater. Other than that, everything's about the title is fine.

Foreword & Description : 38 / 40

The description is written perfectly. Grammars are great. I've got nothing to complain. But the reason why I took two points is because when I read your description about Yejin will take her revenge on Woohyun by using her twin sister, my mind automatically told me that this fanfic will be like other typical fanfics ; the girl got dumped, she was mad, took a revenge  by using her sister, yada yada yada. It's a bit cliche. If you put something like ' Well, it didn't go as what she planned ' or anything to bring the suspicion to the readers about thiss story, it'll be fine.

Readability:  40 / 40

I don't really see any grammar and spelling error. The way you write is easy to understand ; You didn't throw any random, poetic, unacceptable words like some other stories that I know. Full marks ♡

 Characterization : 50 / 50

I really loved all of your characters. Your characters aren't really complicated, they're easy to understand. I personally liked Yejin. At first when she asked Yeonhee to make Woohyun fall in love with her, I was ( literally ) hated that  and cursed her. How dare she saked her twin to do such things and ignoring her 'Guy Phobia'? I'm hating that character until the part where she knews that Yeonhee 'betrayed' her. When she started to compare herself and her sister and later tried to commit suicide, I feel so bad. It's hard to be the plain and 'nothing' when your other siblings are nothing like you. That, had changed my whole perspective to her.

Plotline : 80 / 90

The plot is really good ; not too fast and not too slow for me. It's just the last chapter that you decided to explain everything on that one page.  Well, at least you explained everything even tho you're busy, not like some authors I know who just deleted the nice story cough cough It's really perfect when you describing Yejin's depression and the way of her trying to commit suicide. 

Originality : 28/ 30

It have some cliche, but you implement them and it makes it different from others.

Structure / Mechanism : 29 / 30

Even though you not tagged any specific genre like angst or fluff, Anyone can tell that it's an angsty genre based on the title and the M rated. You had well - described about the characters, every and each of the scenes and how Woohyun with Yeonji and Hoya with Yeonhee ended up to a happy end. 

Bonus : 10/10

A full bonus for the suicide attempt. I have a soft heart for angsty, suicidal scenes and yours are the best so far ♡

Reader's View

Okay, as a reader myself, I JUST LOVE YOUR FANFIC VERY MUCH! ♡ It have the qualities of a good fanfic ; nice plot, readable and understandable, there's minimum grammar error, the perfect angst scenes. I enjoy your story so much ♡

Additional Comments

If you only have a good poster to match with this good story, It'll be a killer for me  

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Overall

294/300

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