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HI GUYSSS... Finally it is my Summer vacations and I will spend these days in writing! So lot many updates to come!!!

I just thought to drop by these two poems which I wrote recently.... The first one, I couldn't give it a title so help me with it!

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A song which was meant to be sung,
A novel which was meant to be read.
A hope which was meant to be lost,
A belief which was meant to be believed.
An affection which was meant to be reciprocated.
A love which was meant to be proved.
A story which was meant to be told.
A promise which was meant to be broken.
A liking which was meant to be liked.
A drama which was meant to be played.
A role which was meant to be forgotten.
An apology which was meant to be forgiven.
A stare which was meant to be met.
A tear which was meant to be wept.
A final-goodbye which was meant to be waved.
A confrontation which was meant to be answered.
A smile which was meant to be broader.
A frown which was meant to be taken back.
The jealousy which was not meant to be shown .
The attraction which was not meant to be made.
THE WORD WHICH WAS MEANT TO BE SAID....
The sadness which was meant to be shared.
The happiness which was meant to be YOU.

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HOW WAS IT?

Comment pls!

 

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Fluffoutprincess #1
I really love the poem but I've a suggestions. The emotions in poem is all over the place. Lines are really good but when you write a poem you tell a story through it, it has to go somewhere. In your poem a positive aura is mixed with negative ones. It feels good to read, there are emotions down at every word but you couldn't tell what was poet feeling at all. Where is all of this going?
It's in a bit jumbled form, sort that out and your poem is ready to be published :)