Need some judgement(haha)

Hello there? I help some opinions...

So you see I posted an original work on Archiveofourown about 2 months ago and I just updated the first chapter. I wanted some opinions on the description and poster(so don't hold back). This is a boyxboy work I'm talking about so if you're not interesting in that stuff then please don't read any further.

Title: Learning to Love his Submissive 

It's going to be part of a series called "Young Alpha"

Description:

Darry Knight is a 30 years old man who teaches history at the East High School. All people know about him is that he's a lonely middle age man who's just living life as it is. But what they don't know is that he's a submissive wolf, who's waiting for his mate to come in his life and calm him. This is where Justin Wilson comes in.

Justin Wilson is a 17 years old dominant wolf, but don't know that yet. He's the school popular frat boy who everybody loves. He's not only rich, but is the captain of the basketball team and the all star quarterback of the football team. He's a playboy. Girls loves him and guys want to be him. So what will happen when on his eighteen birthday he comes to inherited to his inner wolf? And what will he do when he fine out that the teacher he hated all these years is his mate? Worst of all he's a middle age man in his 30?

Poster:(edited by me haha)

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strafield #1
the description is good, it would be nice if you can find pictures of the casts and put it in the poster, it will help the readers to imagine the scene in their minds too :)
NerdyKimchii
#2
The description are good, but TBH I think that you should fix the poster a bit, so that it would look catchy and interesting. Awesome story, by the way :)
sunshineonu #3
Hey..R they imaginative characters or characters from a series..
Description looks good..and interesting...