Poem for School...

Hey Everyone!~

I haven't been on right.. Sorry.. I have been stressing out about yearbook club.. 

But I think I have everything sorted out (Almost) in my senior year.. 

Well.. Anyways. I'm going to enter in one of my writing for a Litetary Magazine for school.. And well I wanted you to check it out.. 

So I posted it on here.. 

It would help, if you would comment.. But I'm going to show this to my teacher I always eat lunch with, since she told me about it.. 

But than I wanted to show it to you guys first.. 

I also posted this on my DeviantArt account.. But choose to post it here too.. (If you want to know my Username you can go to my profile.. I'm pretty sure I posted it there.) 


Also this poem has inspired for me to make yet another story.. But I'm going to check if people like this poem first.. 

So I posted it below.. So please read it.. 

 

Thank you.. Sorry for the trouble.. 

- RemeRis96 

 

 

 


"Footsteps in the Snow" 

 

I remember the laughter,

The jolly screams of joy..

 

I remember the smiles,

That always stayed on our faces..

 

I remember looking out the window just to see white specks falling,

A beautiful blanket of snow everywhere outside our window..

I remember us yelling “Look It’s snowing!”

 

Do you remember making snowmen,  making snow angels and having Snowball fights

Do you remember when we sledded down our neighborhood hill,

staying out from morning to 10:00 at night?

 

I remember Everything

Every year, the seasons pass.. From Summer to Fall, to Winter to Spring and all over again..

But I was never that happy in the other Seasons.

It was to hot in Summer,

To much rain in Fall

and to crowded in the streets in Spring..

 

Winter.. Although people most people don’t like it..

It stands out to me..

From Snow Days, Hot Chocolate, Hot Apple cider and Christmas

It was more than that to me… It was the time I was happiest..

 

Because we had the most memories those times..

It was always the time we smiled and laughed the most.

    Than suddenly Spring comes and washes away the snow..

The smiles fade, The laughter fades And so does our Happiness.

 

When I looked back to you.. That day,

All I saw emptiness, Gray clouds..

When I looked for you.. all I saw was my shadow..

A mirror of what used to be…
Bending down.. There was only one clue that you were ever there.

And that was… The footsteps that your boots made..

The Footsteps in the Snow..

 

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sleepingprince
#1
Nice poems :)