To Greenlight or not

Hey guys. Sooo I was thinking of a new short story. (Chaptered but less than ten chapters.)

 

But I don't know if I should green light it or not, soo, I want you, the readers to help me decide. Here's the description and forward


 

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Description:    

    Jung Taekwoon, a twenty-five year old journalist watches as the whimsical forest of his childhood burns through his window. He’s lost everyone, his friends, his family and his first love in just fifteen years, and he was nearing imprisonment from the authorities heading his way. He knew who was to blame, he knew he could have spared everyone if only he had made better choices in the past. But just how well does his theory hold up when the demon who caused his misfortune challenges Taekwoon to relive the last fifteen years of his life? Can Taekwoon solve the mysteries of the otherworldly forest? Can he save the lives of the people who mean most to him? Can he finally take back the life he knows he can live without fear?

    

 

Forward:

What started fifteen years ago, put Taekwoon in this situation. The police were on the way. The forest outside his home burned around him. His friends, his family, everyone was gone. Only one person stood beside him, the demon only he knew existed, Ravi.

 

“This is where it ends, Taekwoon. You have two choices. Stay here and go to jail or come with me, and end it all.”

    “You’re sick,” The blonde boy spat at the demons feet. “You killed everyone, what makes you think I’d join you?! What makes you think I’d want to be by your side after all this?!”

    “You can’t change fate, Taekwoon. You were fated to be mine, as the world burns around me. Every decision you could of made led to this moment.”

    “Get bent, Ravi!” Taekwoon yelled. “I could never be with you! You took the last friend I had.” A tear fell from the forlorn boy’s eye. “You took Wonshik.”

    “Wonshik willingly gave himself to me. It was his fate, just like you are fated to join me.” Ravi walked to the bedroom window and ushered to the forest below. He smirked as the tremendous flames, lapped at the oak and cedar trees surrounding the baneful cottage Taekwoon once called home.

    Taekwoon turned from the sociopathic demon. “I rather burn alive than join you.”

    Ravi growled. “For s sake, Taekwoon, just give in already. There’s nothing you could’ve done or said to stop this from happening.”

    “Yes I could’ve!” Taekwoon shouted. “I could have saved them all! Sanghyuk, Hongbin, Jaehwan, Hakyeon and especially Wonshik... I could’ve saved them all. I could’ve created a different outcome.”

    “Are you really willing to wager on that,” Ravi asked at Taekwoon turned his way.

    “What do you mean?”

    “Do you really believe if you got another chance, you could stop this from happening?”

    “I know I could!” Taekwoon shouted.

    “Fate set this outcome in stone,” Ravi paced. “We were meant to come to this moment. But if you’re deadset on the erroneous illusion that you can change the future, then I’m always up for a gamble.”

    “What?”

    Ravi reached onto the ground, grabbing an extrinsic newspaper lying about the bloodstained carpet beside Taekwoon’s bed.

    “This paper is the written log of what happened yesterday. Every bloodstained detail of your parents is death catalogued in this article. I’ll send you back before any of this began. If you can stop what happens in this paper, I’ll leave you, and your precious Wonshik alone, if you fail...”

    The demon boy reached out his hand, a blue flame danced around his palm. “You’re mine.”  A pregnant maleficence danced within the air sounding the demon’s palm. A glint of soulless mischief danced within his chrome black eyes. “Do we have a deal?”


 

 

This is a WonTaek story based off of the anime Erased and the Cartoon Gravity Falls. It's a supernatural mystery tale, full of angst and fluff. Anyone interested? Should I go ahead and green light it or focus on my reboot for 'I Have to Win'? I'll leave it to the voters. Be sure to leave a comment whether you're interested or not

 

 

 

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Shiro_Darkness
#1
sounds interesting. not really a Wontaek shipper myself, but I'd defiantly give 'er a look since it sounds interesting. in the end though, it's all up to you hun
matealoki
#2
can I choose all of the above in the survey? :D