kindly check it?

www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/921599/1/as-quiet-as-a-feather-falling-angst-b2st-beast-yoseob-ocgirl Altough it is poorly written, weird, stiff, awkward, plain boring, too mainstream, with bad grammar and also confusing pov (it even confuse me).. I still shamelessly asking you guys to check it lol Feel free to criticize me bcs i'll need that a lot! also if u dislike it please give me the reason (i know there are sooo many reason to dislike it) anyway thats all,, see you there ^^

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